All Comments on 'A Lustful Liaison Ch. 05'

Why is British erotic writing so stilted and self-conscious? Almost as if they write in a language that's foreign to them.

Writing is basically derived from the culture. Brits do not write all the same anyway. Certainly the writing style of American Suburban is way different than Black Urban. Just appreciate the culture of the writer knowing that people have the same needs and desires. The variation is only how satisfaction of those needs is expressed.

I'm not a professional writer, I'm just someone who decided to share this erotic adventure. I've done my best not embellish events, so maybe that's what they mean by stilted? It's written in the first person, so I guess it will be self-conscious.

Continue the story with all three girls after the college trip and the vaca to Sweden. I enjoy your style of writing and don't find it stilted or strange at all. It's a refreshing reminder that there are more cultures than just the USA.