All Comments on 'A Mage's Tale Ch. 01'

by NeoShade

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good start

Awful lot of typos thou 😝

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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A little short but interesting

Ge59Ge59over 6 years ago

a bit longer would be nice and check your editing also. a good start to an interesting story though. Looking forward to reading more of it

grizxgrizxover 6 years ago
Good to see you back

Interesting start hope to see more soon, I have enjoyed your other works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Inkwell

Hi, are you planning on continuing the Inkwell story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thou

'Thou' is spelled 'though'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Feels a bid disjointed and the typos almost makes me want to pass on this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Writing very poor

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18 yrs... amazing. I will be posting a new series in the coming months.. For all those following me.. thank you. This series will NOT continue any of the work I have on this site or any other... sorry. Years ago I had much planned and saved to be posted continuing on Inkwe...

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