All Comments on 'A Maggot in My Mind Ch. 02'

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wifewatcherukwifewatcherukabout 20 years ago
wishing

Very very erotic pair of stories so far.I just wish it was my wife that was at the centre of the story.I cant wait to see what happens next.Well written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Trash

Yes, this is just another piece of Trash that you have written. We think Ricky cannot get a woman on his own and needs the help of someone and something. To the author: If this what you think about, then you DO NEED mental theraphy. Please seek it as soon as possible and in the meantime, please discontinue this story.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU, NO VOTE FOR TRASH LIKE THIS.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Interesting

An interesting concept. I have read both chapters 1 and 2, and believe I can anticipate the continuation as far as the wife is concerned. But you are clever to plant the seeds of a development in the husband's situation - "why," you ask, "is he negatively concerned about his wife's increased interest in sexual activity with him?" You have the beginning of a long work here, and a very interesting one.

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