All Comments on 'A Magical Visitor Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!!

This is by far the best part ever!! You manage to write it wonderfully, describing the foot fetish scene between jessica and madeline extremely well!! I really liked when she used her foot smell to make Jessica developing again her fetish. I hope to see madeline using again her foot smell to enjoy making people who don't have a fetish not only developing one but to her feet :) keep writing. Cheers 😊

jmcidlv15jmcidlv15over 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you so much for the kind words. They are much appreciated! I don’t have another chapter like this planned, but I will try to add some similar ideas in to a later chapter I’m currently working on. So glad you’re enjoying it!

chennai_rakshasanchennai_rakshasanover 4 years ago
Nice!

Although reasonably long, really liked the skillful narration of the story. Good work!

jmcidlv15jmcidlv15over 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thank you for the kind words! This is one of the longest chapters. The later chapters aren’t usually this long.

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