All Comments on 'A Masked Halloween'

Have the sister get pregnant by her brother, thst would be lovely! :3

I totally agree with your last statement that this needs a Part 2,it just can't end without Sister finding out she lost her virginity to her Brother,and have them come to accept their love for each other,so please write Part 2.

I love the story so far. I hope you continue with another chapter. Maybe go in the direction of the the brother that just can’t stop thinking about his sister and how he sees he as a very sexy woman for the first time in his life.

Rather childishly written. EXTREMELY uninspiring sex scene. Who is Emma? Finger quotes around the name Emma. He never got the cake. Sorry but a major miss here.

1 star

DragonRider55

That's not the way a hymen works, it's not a wall and it isn't something that breaks when a girl loses her virginity. Inform yourself and stop spreading this kind of misconceptions, please. Otherwise it was a nice story.

Great beginning thus far. It possibly needs more foundational work prior to taking the story in any particular direction though. But again. Great story thus far.

Perhaps a threesome with sister's friend and sister!

I'd give up now it was terrible. Laughable 'conversation'. The sex took 2 lines. You do realise that is supposed to be the feature right? It was written with as much emotion as a set of instructions on how to use a washing machine.

Please continue on the same track

Write part two! It's needed to see how the revelation turns out.

Get writing fella

Please post chapter 2, this is a well written story and I would love to see the brother and sister do more with them both fully aware of whom they are with.

I've read many stories and find your story line is great, sets the mood and having a brother and sister getting it on; wearing masks is a great. Now, they are about to find out; the brother now knows from his sister's description of him. I think it would be too bad to Not write more chapters about what happens when she finds out. Especially where her brother screwed her so well !! Much potential here and that would be very pleasing to those who read this 1st chapter. So please do and thank you.

Perhaps simply easing into a discovery/continuation of the trist?

Great job

It was great for both, chapter 2 let's them discover each other again, she is not on birth control as she said, a bun in the oven would be great, you get a 5....

Please develop this slowly, and let's see the brother and sister have a three-way with her attractive friend the brother fancies.

I would definitely like to read more of this tale.

I would definitely like to read more

Obviously the direction to go is the sister finding out somehow..... but if you are looking for inspiration... there is a 3 part story in literotica that is absolutely one of my all time favourite stories callled "the mixer" ....

He cant forget about this and needs more.

But more detailed sex scenes please

The story stands alone pretty well, but I'm sure you could get them in more mischief.

Great start. Can't wait to read the next part.

Could have had a little more sex. But well done THANKS

Like to see a pt. 2 , and find out what happened. Thanks

Please write part two! So wanna see what happens if and when Rose finds out it was him.

Read this story with roles reversed, atleast be original

I loved this story

I don’t want to insult you, but I can swear I already have read this story.

Although I don’t know who wrote it or where I saw it.

Gave you 5* for a great launch to the story and avidly await Chapter 2.

Come on, this is garbage.. if you're going to tell a story, at least be original and don't steal someone else's work.

Nice try tho!

Very nice story, it was built for follow up. You can't just drop it like it is.

this was a nice story and to all the trolls complaining safely in their shield of anonymous commenting this story formula although a common one when themed in halloween and incest this is different than the others when you throw around accusations of copying either name the story and author or shut up I happen to have read just about everyone of the stories using this formula of accidental incest and mistaken identity which can easily be found using the tag portal this is good and deserves a sequel

He gets home at midnight and is scared of getting told off and grounded. Must be 12 or younger.

I loved this story. It definitely needs to be continued.

Make it be an "accident" that Rose finds his coustoume because she came to his room to collect the 2nd half of their deal but he was in the shower

Sounds good

I wonder what route you'll take

Sis knew it was him all along

Sis finds costume

Second costume party, non halloween related

He brings it up

So many possibilities

Really enjoyed this story.

Hope to see where it goes. But more creameries and maybe some other sexy costumes perhaps?

But I do feel like Rose is oblivious to that she just had sex with her brother.

Josh should keep hooking up with Rose but in his secret identity & Rose really like it. Then Rose's birth control should fail.

She decided to give up her virginity to some guy in a mango fett mask after 2 minutes of small talk? Seriously?? Even a hardened slut would need more than 2 minutes of drivel.

she knew it was him. and she has been planning this for months. now they will be exclusive to each other.

I truly loved the story, and saddened it ended I would love to see and read more. David

I also think you should write other parts of this story. I had an encounter much like this long ago. "40 plus yrs" at a Halloween party it turned out to be a long lasting affair between a very close friend of my family that was not blood related, But she was just about raised in my family home from the age of 4. We thought of her as a litter sister. Her father and mine where in business together and our mom's where best friends. At the time of the party she was 18 I was 20 and going into the Army in less than a month. Well enough about me but I will say that me and Kimberly are still good friends even at the ripe old age of 61 for her and 63 for me so you see that some relationships do last Please keep writing this story. I am a reader from Florida

Good story.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

More please

I liked it and would like to see additional chapters as I could see this going many different directions.

5 stars

Did you ever write more?

Thanks

more of this story please