All Comments on 'A Master Using his Slut'

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 9 years ago
I stopped reading

at 'waste'.

One star for crap spelling.

When the written word is the only way you can communicate, try to write correctly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Liked it

I don't read for the spelling, the story was good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Spell Check Please...

I agree, could have been a good story but there were so many spelling & grammatical errors I couldn't even read the entire story. In one paragraph Master removes Slut's clothes, in the next she's standing and removing them herself???? Try again and next time, proof the story and use spelling & grammar check before submitting.

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