All Comments on 'A Master's Wish'

I've fantasized about a scene like this with my girlfriend and her mother, and, though I'm not into the pain aspect of B&D, the sensual appeal of this story is hard to resist. Maybe someday the author might write something similar, no pain, but with a sexual slave theme?

I enjoyed the story and would like to see how it might continue

I think that you should let go and not just use story text. I would almost bet that it runs in the family and Daughter would like it as much as you would. Keep the stories cummin!

man, i couldn't believe what a hot story that was! keep up the great work. make it a series. i want to read more about this!!!!!

well done its one hot story! keep up the good work!

My Master found this story for me and I can't wait to read the next chapters - It's almost like the author has been living in my head! Keep writing --- Please!

WOODEN, STILTED LANGUAGE, NO REAL FLOW, BLAND, AWKWARD, AND CLUMSY!!!! OFF-PUTTING!!!! UNCOMFORTABLE, FORCED, RELUCTANT STYLE!!!! THIS AUTHOR WRITES AS IF IT IS A CHORE AND HE/SHE IS LOATHE TO PUT MORE THAN MINIMAL EFFORT INTO CREATING A SOPHISTICATED AND REWARDING EXPERIENCE FOR THE READER!!!! IF HE/SHE WERE INDEED A SLAVE THIS TYPE OF APATHETIC APPROACH WOULD SURELY LEAD TO MUCH PAIN AND PUNISHMENT!!!!

opened minded (open-minded)

her and I (she)

I (-was the) (had) butterflies in (my) stomach

I (-spied upon) Master’s (noticed) (my)

jaw line (jawline)

piped (up) that

ordered (-for) only

not you mother (your)

I want her too (to)

and setting the bucket (set)

I witness (witnessed)

He sat Master’s (set) (2)

reminded (him)

had me daughter (my)

involved with each (other)

he took (He)

all that (All)

proceeds to spank (proceeded)

counted a full dozen . . . fed thirteen of them . . . last two (13 + 2 = 15 NOT 12!!!!INNUMERATE!!!!)

When I reached the (-correct) door, I realized that the moaning was coming from behind (-the door) (it)

I am (a) slave

lowers his head (lowered)

(-this was not to be looked forwarded) (he did not look forward) to (this) either

thru my brain (through)

exited (-out) the room

eye opener (eye-opener )

open minded (open-minded)

it was me (I)

rear view (rear view)

groping my kid (-about)

tho (though) (3)

hand cuffs (handcuffs)

It will drive her wild (-with it)

it (-soon) take me very long (didn’t)

naked as me (I was)

slowly slid (slide)

STOPPING till she asked him to STOP (7 WORDS)

turn to me (turned)

i (I)

her’s (hers)

(-the) her slit