by edgephile
That was an interesting spin on masturbation..I liked it.. looking forward to reading more..
Well written. Hoping pt. 2 will be them masturbating themselves in front of each other.
Absolutely loved this story, and it was very well written! Can't wait to read more, but I wonder, will you stick to masturbation, or will he and Rose actually have sex? I for one would be happy with a pure masturbation story, but either way I'm sure it will be great!
This is such a fun and sensually intriguing story. It represents the kind of fantasy I enjoy most - a natural-feeling flow of dialogue while savoring nude play. The interest that she showed in all aspects of his masturbatory playfulness is delightfully erotic.