by SisterJezabel
Had to laugh at the 4 inch Spaniard reference. I really liked this story with the character buildup and the nice story pace. Glad for a very happy ending and well worth the five stars, thanks
It's so great to see an Australian story here! The characters are very relatable. I did actually cry when Maureen died, not gonna lie.
Such a sweet, well written story! I had a tear in my eye at one point, and a smile as it continued. Great job! 5*
...because I've been there with both my parents. Sadly there was no sexy nurse harboring hidden feelings of desire, for me. Damn you for making me feel that again, and thank you for making me remember my ornery folks. ;-)
Wonderful and memorable characters and a truly great story!
If I may make a suggestion, I think getting someone to edit for you would help it be even better. There were some sentence structures that were a bit awkward and I had to reread those to get the meaning you intended. But you have a real gift for storytelling :).
Looking forward to reading more.
HUGH IS A WIMPY CUNT AND SLUT!! HE COMES BACK WORKS IN THE SAME HOSPITAL AND DOES NOT TELL HER THEN HE MAKES HER WALK UP THE STAIRS AFTER THE CONCERT AND CRIES LIKE A LITTLE WIMPY EXPLAINING WHY HE IS A DISEASED SLUT!! PATHETIC MC!!
Lovely romantic tale …… life in general is a roller coaster ride, some are more crazier then for others, but just a smooth sailing down your path, never heard of such luck ….. so all the colliding pathways had one outcome love and this is truly some to strive for
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Hugh is a manslut and Fleur is a really desperate bitch, no self respect!!!
Working in the same hospital yet he didn't have the balls to tell her!!
Oh well, two sex crazy desperate losers