All Comments on 'A Match Made before Heaven'

by SisterJezabel

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oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 4 years ago
Small dick Spaniard

Had to laugh at the 4 inch Spaniard reference. I really liked this story with the character buildup and the nice story pace. Glad for a very happy ending and well worth the five stars, thanks

fivefplan1fivefplan1almost 4 years ago
Another great story...

Had me in tears!!!

5.

Isabel_InnuendeIsabel_Innuendeover 3 years ago

It's so great to see an Australian story here! The characters are very relatable. I did actually cry when Maureen died, not gonna lie.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 3 years ago

Such a sweet, well written story! I had a tear in my eye at one point, and a smile as it continued. Great job! 5*

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 3 years ago

The Best Tears?

Are Happy Tears!

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
sorry...

well written, but the procreation stuff turns me off...

NovaPrime71NovaPrime71almost 3 years ago
This had me intears as well...

...because I've been there with both my parents. Sadly there was no sexy nurse harboring hidden feelings of desire, for me. Damn you for making me feel that again, and thank you for making me remember my ornery folks. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful and memorable characters and a truly great story!

If I may make a suggestion, I think getting someone to edit for you would help it be even better. There were some sentence structures that were a bit awkward and I had to reread those to get the meaning you intended. But you have a real gift for storytelling :).

Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

HUGH IS A WIMPY CUNT AND SLUT!! HE COMES BACK WORKS IN THE SAME HOSPITAL AND DOES NOT TELL HER THEN HE MAKES HER WALK UP THE STAIRS AFTER THE CONCERT AND CRIES LIKE A LITTLE WIMPY EXPLAINING WHY HE IS A DISEASED SLUT!! PATHETIC MC!!

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 1 year ago

Lovely romantic tale …… life in general is a roller coaster ride, some are more crazier then for others, but just a smooth sailing down your path, never heard of such luck ….. so all the colliding pathways had one outcome love and this is truly some to strive for

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🙏

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Hugh is a manslut and Fleur is a really desperate bitch, no self respect!!!

Working in the same hospital yet he didn't have the balls to tell her!!

Oh well, two sex crazy desperate losers

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A wedding at a Cemetery......what a stupid writer

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10 December- "Hey Twister—Letters to my dead twin" has been submitted in the Letters and Transcripts section and should be published in the next few days. It's fairly lengthy (25k words) but can easily be read in sections. I'll be honest- I like romance and happy endings. My...

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