All Comments on 'A Matter of Blood Pt. 08'

will check daily for ch. 9

You have managed to increase the tension and intensity with each chapter. I can’t wait for the fireworks of the last chapter. Thank you for sharing your stories here.

This needs to be made into a movie

Or raisa...or any of the other mothers/sisters

May I say that by far, this is the closest story that I've read, to an actual published novel in it's amazing writing and character development? I love the detail and action, the depth and development, most of all that the story can stand alone without the sex! Not to say that the sex scenes aren't wonderful, but I can say I'd read this story without them. So if you keep writing, then I'll keep reading!

Another great chapter!! 5 * Will be looking for #9. Thanks for your time and efforts.

He could smell her musk ... y not just say he enjoyed the stench of her queef box? Some of these lines are eww. You should stop milking the chapters and condense it 2 to 1.

Anonymous(without a title) commentator needs to get a life. He or she has no knowledge of what it takes to create a story. So they need to move on instead of showing their ignorance. This is a great story and I can see all the hard work you have put into each chapter. Please keep sharing your talent. To Anonymous (without a title) move on to the one page yank crap on this site they seem to be more your style.

About that milking comment, its not milking if you are not getting paid by the letter. Lol

Love this story. Cant wait for the next one.

Hopefully will be out on Tuesday or Wednesday...

this is one of two stories that have been written for this sitr that are just incredible reads. make no mistake there are somevery good stories bit i have found pne that was equal to this one (or vise versa). i really hate to see it end but i understand it has to b a grind on you. just wanted to say a truely well crafted story. best wishes to you and on ypur future endevers. mike

I really hope there's more after 9

I know there is only one section left. But I dont want this story to end. The writing and the storyline itself have done nothing but get better as it progressed. Keep up the good work.

I know I am late in the game to this series (seeing as it is halfway through 2020 at the time I am writing this) but I will be truly sad to finish this tale. I have utilized every fiber of self control within me to not binge read the whole story in one go. Stretching out the chapters over multiple weeks has given me even more of an appreciation for the intricacies of your writing. I will be sad to see the story conclude, but I trust your writing and know that the finale will be spectacular! Definitely a book that I will return to over and over again. Your hard work and love for the craft have made A Matter of Blood a true gem in the world of Lit. Thank you!

Fuck Fuck Fuck! I'm totally in love with Raisa, and now you're going to go and kill her! Argh! 5/5

after the man she loved and his uncle run a marathon on her she went to sleep in the cuck's arms. this MC is pathetic af