All Comments on 'A Matter of Time'

This should have been in Loving Wives. There is no erotic coupling here. I suppose the author put it here because he is afraid of his work being viewed there.

and slew the source not the messengers, TK U MLJ LV NV

Really like it when things go wrong during time travel adventures.

Well done.

Space and time travel with the Dimensional Dilator sounds like evev more fun. Could the operator shrink or enlarge people so they could crawl inside a cunt or testicle? The possibilities are frightening!

However, this is too weird for my taste therefore an average 3***.

WTF..1*

Very creative.

Wow. Just, wow.

I have completely wasted the past 10 minutes of my life by reading this. 'Hypoxia' is an apt name, as a severe lack of oxygen to the brain WOULD explain how disjointed the story became.

You get a star, because I actually read the whole thing, but that's it.

what a waste of TIME

It really sets the tone, as well as repetition of the word Terrific was in a word: Terrific. I'll keep looking for a more serious story, but these are great exceptions to writing for Realism. 1: Humor/Parody, and 2 World-building with a science fiction element that warps reality. Like a Dimensional Dilator. (Dildo is short for Dilator, not to mention DD being a cup size.) Very funny, though.

Caught several of the references. Not a terribly erotic piece, but humorous.

There is an actual DD214 in this time and dimension; it's DD Form 214, Report of Separation from Active Duty, more popularly known to veterans as Discharge Certificate. Is there a connection? Is it supposed to be satirical? Or is it just a strange coincidence?

Yes, it's satirical. I've got mine. It dilates many dimensions for me: store discounts, parking places, social functions. The story's DD214 name just evolved. Once I knew I had a Dimensional Dilator, working at all scales in all possible space-time-reality dimensions, the version number became apparent. Enjoy!

Excellent satire!!! I love the way he burns the boyfriend/lovers. Could he have killed Tiffany just after his kids were born??

Fun stuff! Well written.

But cell phones didn't exist in the past he visited, so they couldn't be remote controls :) jk

5 stars, loved it. Even the crude racial stereotypes were humorous in this context. Please do more with these characters and this world you created. Does he find Leila?