All Comments on 'A Matter Of Trust'

Great build-up, wonderful imagery! Amazing story. Top notch! how bout a sequel!

wonderful story truely a love story and not just a spank off story. you should do a second story for real just so colin can kick seth arse up between his eyebrows.

Very good story, just a bit too long too much detail.

I have been an avid reader of Literotica for a short time. Most of the authors who write their stories bore me as I do not have the patience to complete reading their dribble.

The topic of Mother and Son incest has fascinated me. I never had THE URGE to attempt my erotic incest fantasies.

Your story held my interest. Aileen, Colin and their extended family were so realistic. It was reading a true story!!

You are very talented. I will look forward to reading your future work. This story would make a wonderful movie. Tone down the sex scenes between Mother and Son. You will have a R rating instead of a NC-17.

The amount of tenderness and truth about abusive relationships in this story amazes me.

The writing is tight, well paced, the descriptions could have come from real life, and the characters are so well developed that I could almost say they were neighbors. An extremely well written story that hit home with me in a lot of ways.

Excellent build-up, nice language and a perfect ending. It's one of the best stories on Literotica. Keep it up.

Excellent story and exceptionally well done. Looking forward to another.

This story is written so well I was lost in it!

My sincere thanks for sharing!

Please write a sequel were Seth gets whats coming to him!

Best Regards

the way the story is built up, defining the characters and environment of the events, is of much higher quality than your ordinary literotica writers.

This is not an suck and fuck erotic story. To justify incest is very difficult in real sense except in erotic stories. Angelo Michael has done lot of work to build up this story and deserve all the praise for his excellent work.

Brilliant, the best story I've read anywhere on the net. In an ideal world it should be printed, published and sell millions of copies. Please can we have a sequel?. Well done.

NeilM, (UK).

Wish i could get you a higher rating,wonderful loving story enjoyed reading it.

u have read the good comments... i agree the good one to the greatest... but, now, tell me, why have u stopped...? where are the other parts ...... come on, it's been so long.... shit, i am tired of waiting.....

What a beautiful story, well written. One of the best stories I have read. Well done. Now looking to read the other parts. X

..is undoubtedly the best mother/son incest story I've ever read . It is tender, touching and creates a believable and justifiable context for their relationship. The characters are well-drawn and credible - so much more so than in those stories where the writer's attempt at charactersiation of a woman stops with telling us her bra size. The way in which the cycle of violent abuse that starts with Aileen's father goes on through her marriage and will probably pass on to Seth is also very truthful. Thank you for a wonderful read.

...some British influence here. My experience with 18 year old boys tells me that the proper use of the Kings English, as is quite evident with this young man, is LESS than evident in American kids. This kid knew more 50 cent words than most teachers I know! "...Devastated...?" Come on...That's my ONLY criticism! The affection between mother and son trumps everything else in this warm, sad, sexy tale. What the hell...incest or no...it has always been love that has conquered all...This is my second read of this terribly hot and horny story...Still rates highly in my mind...

It's not often I become fully engrossed in a storyline but you achieved this here. I found the story well structured providing the background pieces in all the right places.

Rather than keep lathering further compliments I would highly recommend you to look at taking this hobby? further and getting into the book areas. I have no doubt you will make a hit as your writing capabilities show you can address the wider audience.

Well done and thanks for the story!

Cheers

Paul

I could go on at length as to how well the story was crafted but it would seem redundant to all who read it. It had the perfect pace, the length, the intrigue, and the intimacy of a growing love. From start to finish, it built like the most perfect of orgasms. It drew me in, enticed me with every paragraph, and released me - completely satisfied - at its completion.

Thank you for a very good story, which was unusually well written. Cheers!

Why do so many people spend the effort to make their lovers seem real then blow it by forcing a totally un-real bit of anal intercourse into a new love affair? Otherwise good style, but get a better proofreader [hard as steal/steel].

I always fantasized as if i am Colin with my momma Aileen

That was awesome. I even teared up several times. Truly wonderful story. Thank you.

I can certainly see why this story has gotten such a high score. It was extremely well written and the sex when it finally came was super hot. Can't wait to read the rest of the series!!

BRAVO!!!!

Incredible story, you truly understand the essence and beauty behind mother son incest. Devastated the series was left incomplete.

As I prepared to lavish praise I read the latest comment.

I'm brokenhearted at the idea of Not continuing, yet, how much worse the pain of going forward knowing only abandonment awaits?

So much for the author's grasp of the meaning of trust.

J

Just found this story and im about to start reading the follow ups. This was such a great story, and Im looking forward to more from you.

Just wow. Really, i'm not a new reader, been here for a while, and i usually don't comment but dam, this story hit right in the feels. I swear, at one point i forgot that it was supposed to be erotic fiction (i'm talking about Aileen past and background story). I swallowed entire thing in one sitting. Certainly a must-read.

Doesn't seem like an incest story. more like a beautiful love story with two hurt and damaged but loving people.

You depraved cunts. Why do all you closet faggots always have the male characters eat their own cum? Fucking disgusting.

this guy down here has some real issues man...he really needs to chill out.....and great story...loved it...imma give you 5 stars

This is exactly the style of writing I search for. The characters are fully developed, both emotionally, physically, and mentally. Their backgrounds are fully developed. The reader knows and understands where each character is coming from. As an avid reader of incest stories and one who has no trouble accepting a mutually agreeable incestuous loving arrangement in real life, this coupling is exactly how I believe one would be. The trust between the two would be unbreakable and unquestionable. The freedom to be oneself with each other would be unrestrained. 5-star story/series.

A good story. Well balanced and thought out.

I hope the rest of the Trilogy is just as entertaining.

Interesting Anon You depraved Cunts comments.

He is quite unperturbed by spousal abuse, child abuse, attempted rape, more child abuse, mother/son role play, mother son sex, anal sex and voyeurism But he gets so upset at a curious 18 year old boy willing to try CE for the first time that he feel he is justified in verbally abusing people about it.

A lot has been covered in this particular part of this series .. liked how well it was concocted with fred and Aileen, then later ben emerged as a mirror image of fred again to create havoc in leena's life .. but about Seth and his new girlfriend.. it would be interesting to see colin going back to school and not be bothered by Seth ...

Base has been set .. now the story begins ...