by itscalledhazing
Too long. Not enough emotion with his sister.Try a second episode.
I loved it. The next chapter should involve her becoming aware of what she is doing and being OK with it. This story has quite a ways to go.
I enjoyed the story, I hope that there are more chapters to come.
I hope this story has a few more chapters, I like that it isn't as rushed as some other stories that jump straight In with no build up.
I kept expecting it to be a long con and the sister was never under the spell, she just wanted her brother’s cock.
Beautiful job of building a fantastic story.
Wish you did more.
Was she a virgin? This left me a little disappointed.