All Comments on 'A Mere Figment Ch. 03'

I was a little apprehensive at first, it seemed wrong, him not being who she thought he was, not that he knew she didn't realize it was him of course, and then his reaction to her the next morning (though who could blame him?!), but as her feelings for him became clear it was both beautiful as well as deliciously raunchy. Well done!

I hope you make more with these two :)

Despite some grammatical errors, this was a really good story! I hope you continue the story and that it becomes a full-blown romance and not just a summer fling. Great job!