All Comments on 'A Midnight Clear'

Loved it. I'll come back for more.

That was wonderful and could have easily been in the Romance category. Merry Christmas and thanks.

That was cute and hot and heartwarming. Thank you.

A beautiful story with a long, steady build up and a torrid climax. Well developed, beautiful word-pictures and nice exploration of emotions. Loved it. Congratulations, Lily.

Very well written wonderful romantic Holiday story! Perfect blend of romance, blazing hot sex, with explosive orgasms. Rated a big 5! Great work Lily.

Heartfelt, joyful love. A perfect Christmas Eve, putting their bodies to the use God intended.

Wonderfully imagined and perfectly written 5-star story!

Such a wonderful story - slow sweet build up. Explosive raw ending. Perfect!

Well written and superbly constructed. Looking forward to the next ride!

That was a beautiful story! I loved it!

Took me a while to get to this, but it was well worth the wait :-) wonderful winter imagery, complete with horses; what’s not to love?

5 Stars Great Christmas Story.

5 stars for a beautiful story, healing for her the perfect Christmas gift. And I want some of that sex, wow.

Lovely story. Lovely writing. Thank you for the two lovely orgasms it gave me. Just….lovely.