All Comments on 'A Midnight Snack - The Main Course'

by venus_can

Sort by:
  • 12 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Absolutely wonderful series...perhaps a reunion or a threesome with the girlfriend?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Sex

A lot of good fucking! Keep writing.

ogianogianabout 13 years ago
One-sentence Paragraphs

You have a nice plot, good writing, and high level of eroticism. The only suggestion I could make is for readability purpose, group sentences that have the same strain into paragraphs, instead of having just one-sentence paragraphs all throughout.

ogianogianabout 13 years ago
Edited version of your 3 stories

I took the liberty of editing your 3 Midnight Snack stories, rolled them into one and assigned chapters to correspond to each of the story. I also followed the suggestion I previously made and edited punctuations and sentence and paragraph constructions.

I hope you don't mind. Here are the amalgamated stories:

A Midnight Snack

by venus_can©

Chapter 1 - The Appetizer

The incessant ringing of the telephone woke me up. I looked at the bedside clock and sighed as I realized it was well past 7:00 AM.

"Hello," I mumbled.

"Hello Kitty, Kitty," said the voice on the other end, sounding unbelievably cheerful at this time of the day.

"Mike," I screamed as I heard the ever cheerful voice of my brother, "How the hell are you?"

"I will be in your neighborhood for a conference," he replied. "Can I come by and see you?"

"You certainly may!' I squealed with delight. "Why don't you stay with me?"

"Sure!" he confirmed. "I will be there Friday night."

"I will be wearing my lace panties," I giggled.

"See you Friday Kat. Love ya.”

"Love ya a whole lot more Mikey," I replied and hung up.

The memory of our teenage years came back.

I had to go to party and I was dateless. I turned to my older brother Mike for help and he agreed to be my date. I was wearing a short skirt to show off my legs. I was wearing a tight blouse with the top button open to show off my cleavage enhanced by a push up bra.

We were walking along when a sudden gust of wind blew my skirt up, exposing my lace panties.

The expression on my brother's face was interesting to watch. His eyes widened. Then he broke into a wide smile.

"You got a pretty ass!" he exclaimed.

From that day on, it became our joke. He would refer to my pretty ass whenever he wanted to emphasize something.

I was excited by the thought of spending time with Mike again -- maybe I could persuade him to stay a few more days with me.

Before I knew it, the week was gone and it was Friday. Soon after I saw him come down the escalator with a huge grin on his face. I could barely contain myself as I ran to the bottom of the escalator and hugged him.

"You look great!" he gushed. "What a dumb ass," he said referring to my ex-boyfriend, "Jim is such an idiot."

When Jim and I parted ways three months ago, Mike was the first one I turned to for comfort.

"Why?" I wanted to know.

"How could that fucking jackass leave you?" he continued his diatribe. "Are you seeing anyone yet?"

"Nah," I replied,."I think I have had enough of boyfriends for a while."

"Sorry to hear that Kat," he looked concerned.

"So how is the love of your life?" I asked trying to change the topic.

I had not met Mike's girlfriend, but Mike never shied away from sharing details about their sex life.

"Actually anyone's sex life would be better than mine right now," he replied.

I groaned inwardly as I heard him provide the juicy details.

"Penny for your thoughts," Mike's voice brought me back to earth.

"What? Yeah, OK," I stammered.

"Are you okay Kat?" Mike was concerned. "You were suddenly far away."

"Oh no, I am fine," I lied.

"Okay," he replied, not quite believing me. .

We drove the rest of the way in silence.

"We are home," I declared as we pulled up.

Mike retrieved his bags from the trunk and took them inside.

"I can't believe it is SO hot here," Mike said for the umpteenth time.

He took his shirt off.

My heart skipped a beat.

He must have been working out. I could not take my eyes off his bulging biceps.

I also noticed his tan. His upper body was tanned and blended well with his golden blond hair.

"What are you looking at Kat?" Mike's mocking tone brought me out of my reverie.

"Just admiring those muscles Mikey," I replied, pressing fingers against his six-pack, "you working out?"

"Yeah," he replied with a grin, "I gotta keep up with Leah."

"Okay, you can put your stuff here," I pointed to the closet, "and put that body on the bed."

"Thanks sweetie," he replied with a smile. "I think I will have a shower first."

Before I could turn around, he started to unbutton his jeans and pull them down.

I stood watching transfixed as he dropped his jeans and stood in front of me in his boxers. I noticed a slight bulge in the boxers and I could feel a flush creep up my back and into my face.

"Okay, I will see you later," I half-shouted as I turned around and hurried out.

I went to the other guest bedroom that served as my office space to browse through my emails. I could hear the bathroom fan go on, followed by running water, which I assumed was that him shaving.

After a while I heard the loud noise of water streaming into a bowl. I smiled as I recognized the sound as that of peeing. Suddenly, my mind leaped back to when he stood in front of me in his shorts. I felt the familiar feeling of warmth creeping up through me. I quickly tried to banish those thoughts from my head.

"He is your brother damn it!" I screamed silently.

"So?" started my other voice, "he is strong, he is handsome and probably well hung!"

I tried to fight the feeling, "No, no! He IS my brother, not another guy."

"So?" the other voice asked me again. "Remember you haven't had sex in the last 3 months!"

Further conversations in my head were interrupted by the ringing of the telephone.

"Hello!" I spoke into the telephone, relieved by the interruption.

"Kat?" the voice wanted to know.

"Yes," my tone was neutral.

"Hey I am Leah," the voice at the other end was warm and friendly. "We meet at last!"

"Finally," I exclaimed, "I am delighted to hear your voice."

"So," Leah asked, "when are you planning to come by this way?"

"Hopefully soon Leah," I was uncertain. "Mike is in the shower. Oh wait!"

I heard the shower stop. "If you don't mind holding for a couple of minutes Leah, I will ask him to pick up the bathroom telephone, okay?"

"Sure, not a problem," Leah replied." Thanks and hope to see you soon."

I put the handset down and walked toward the bathroom. The door was slightly ajar.

I turned the fan off and shouted, "Mikey, Leah is on the phone. Please pick up the one near the shower okay?"

"Okay, thanks!" he shouted back.

I peeked in through the door to make sure he picked up the phone, just as he stepped out of the shower. A sharp breath escaped my lips as I watched him walk up to the wall telephone, completely naked. I stood transfixed at the door, watching my brother speaking to his girlfriend.

More amazing was that his pubic area was completely hairless. My mind compared this to Jim's hairy crotch. Jim would not never agree to shave it all off. His penis, which was not fully erect, seemed to be huge, definitely bigger than Jim's.

I watched with growing fascination as Mike take his flaccid cock in his free hand and massage it gently. His eyes were half closed, as he spoke softly into the telephone. His hand was moving faster and faster as his cock achieved full erection, standing proud and away from his body. I figured it must be at least eight inches long.

I licked my dry lips with my tongue while my legs felt weak. I put my hand against the wall to support myself. My other hand found its way through the waistband of my skirt and panties. I rubbed my clit, running my fingers over the pussy lips.

I dipped a finger into my pussy and found it wet and well lubricated. My hips moved forward as if on their own, enclosing my finger in the depths of my pussy. A sigh escaped my lips as I felt the growing need for sex. I watched with horror when Mike's hands stopped moving and he turned around to look at the door. I stepped back into the shadows of the hallway.

When I ventured to peek in again, he had resumed his stroking while speaking on the telephone. Consumed by my lust and need, I watched my brother masturbating to the distant voice and matched my movements to his. My fingers were going in and out of my pussy while my thumb was stroking my clit.

"I am cumming baby!" I could hear Mike say louder into the telephone, "I am cumming for YOU!"

With that his body jerked a little and I could see the thick white liquid spurt out the opening of his cock as a steady stream.

I could not hold back any longer either, as my hips suddenly stopped moving and my thighs tightened. I felt cum on my hands as I cupped my mouth with hands to prevent my screaming. I was relieved and saw Mike drip the last drops into his hands and hang up the telephone.

Just as I thought he was going to be done, he lifted up the toilet seat and let a steady stream of pee into the bowl.

I had to restrain myself into not kicking down the door and holding that beautiful piece of man meat in my hands. Having completed his discharge, Mike cleaned the tip of his cock with a piece of toilet paper and put on a fresh pair of boxers. He was combing his hair and I figured hanging around the bathroom was ill-advised.

I ran back to my office, hoping the flush creeping up my face would subside.

A few minutes later, Mike poked his head through the door.

"I am starving," I heard him asking. "Shall I fire up the grill?"

I turned around to find Mike standing at the doorway in his boxers.

"Oh my!" I thought as I caught myself staring at his crotch.

"Sounds like a great idea," I agreed. "I have a couple of pieces of seasoned salmon fillet. You can throw that on the barbie."

"Yum," he licked his lips, "I love your lemon and peppercorn seasoning."

"I will be down in a few minutes," I announced. "I need to take a shower too."

"Okay fine," Mike replied heading down the stair, "don't take too long."

I smiled as I headed into my bedroom. It was so typical of Mike. I got out of my clothes and threw them into the hamper along with my now damp panties. I caught my reflection in the mirror.

At 5'11, I had taken after Mike in my height. With a bust that fit comfortably in a bra size of 34B, I had a boyish figure. My nipples were hard and erect, betraying my excitement. As I headed to the bathtub, I noticed a a drop of a whitish substance on the edge of the tub. I ran my finger over the substance to see what it was. It felt sticky and smooth between my fingers. It had a musky smell, when it dawned on me that I was staring at a drop of Mike's cum.

Before I could control myself, I brought my finger close to my face and licked it.

"Lightly salted!" I thought to myself as I realized I had just tasted my brother's cum.

I turned on the water and stood under the shower, letting the streams of warm water all over me. As I took the body wash on a wash cloth and soaped my body, my mind began to wander, thinking again of Mike and then his cock. I could feel the excitement build up inside me again.

I picked up the shaving cream and the razor and shaved my underarms and legs. Then carefully I shaved all of my pubic hair. I rinsed off the conditioner and stepped out of the shower. As I patted myself dry, I looked in the mirror again, to make sure I had not missed any hair. Satisfied, I realized how pink my pussy lips appeared.

Covering myself in the bath towel, I headed to the bedroom. I found my favorite green paisley print sundress which stood way up on my thigh and showed off my bare back. Wearing a bra was out of the question. As I rummaged through my panty drawer, a sudden devilish thought occurred to me. I closed the panty drawer without putting one on and ran down the stairs. I went out on to the deck where the welcome smell of cooking fish and corn hit my nostrils.

Still shirtless, Mike was hunched over the barbecue, cleaning up the grill. The fish fillets wrapped in foil, were on the table along with salad, grilled vegetables and corn.

"I'll get the beer while you finish up," I said, running back into the kitchen.

I headed back out to the patio, with a cooler filled with a few bottles of beer.

"Wow!" Mike was staring at me as I walked by. All he had on was his boxers.

"Wow what?" I teased him. "Haven't you seen a girl in a dress before."

I realized that he was staring at my chest. My nipples were protruding through the thin fabric of my dress.

"You are not wearing a bra?" leave it to Mike to get straight to the point.

"Michael!" I raised my voice in mock protest and stuck my tongue out.

He blushed as he suddenly realized that his erection was showing through the fabric of his boxers.

"Shit!" he swore. "Sorry sis. You are looking very sexy tonight."

"Thank you Mikey," I blew him a kiss.

"And," he continued, "there is always something very erotic about seeing erect nipples through a dress."

"Jeez Mike," I tried to cover my chest in mock modesty, "if you keep talking like this, I will reach out and pull your cock out of your boxers."

We both laughed.

"And if you were not my sister, I would fuck you right now," he was still laughing.

"Okay, enough of this," I wanted to stop this before I lost my self-control, "lets eat. I am starving."

"Good idea," Mike said as he served the food.

I bent down to retrieve the beer from the cooler and noticed Mike was still staring at me.

"Cut it out Mikey, you are staring at my boobs."

"Sorry," he was apologetic.

"That's okay."

I steered the conversation to Leah, his job, his conference and so on. I watched him in the fading sunlight as he talked with glowing enthusiasm.

Our beers were gone and he stood up, stretched and let out a big yawn. "Its been a long day, sis", he said stifling a yawn, "I will trade the dessert for some sleep."

"Sure," I could see he was tired, "go on upstairs, I will clean up."

"Thanks Kat," he held out his hands.

"You are welcome," I replied fitting myself in his embrace.

Mike's hands felt hot on my bare back.

As I stood up on my tiptoes to kiss him good night, the front of my dress lifted up. I could feel his growing hardness through the boxers against my suddenly bare pussy. Almost unconsciously, I moved up and down, feeling Mike's thick shaft as I felt the first tinges of wetness.

"Goodnight sweetie," I could feel Mike's hot breath on my ears.

"'Night!" I responded, brushing my lips against his and ending on his cheek.

He let me go and thankfully the front of my dress came down. I forced myself to turn away, so he would not notice the flush creeping up my face. As I turned away, my breasts brushed against his hand.

"Oopsie", we both said in unison, while his hand cupped my breast.

I felt a jolt of electricity flow through his hands, lighting my whole body on fire. With weak knees I sat down on the chair.

"Sleep tight sweetheart," he started.

"And don't let the bed bugs bite!" I completed.

He slowly walked away, as if shaken by the experience.

Once all the dishes were put away, I turned off the lights and headed to my bedroom. I could not resist a peek through open door of the darkened guest bedroom as I passed by. I breathed a sigh of relief as I heard the soft snores.

I went into my own bedroom and peeled off my dress. I looked at my night gown laying on the bed, but decided to sleep naked. The cool satin sheets felt good against my skin. As I snuggled underneath the blankets, I closed my eyes with my hands cupping my breasts. All I could think of was that it was Mike's hand caressing my breasts.

My other hand found my wet pussy. As I lay there pleasuring myself, a wave of orgasm hit me. As it subsided, sleep finally overtook me. My last thought before I fell into a deep sleep was that the next few days were going to be very interesting.

Chapter 2 - The Entree

I felt a breath of warm air caress my breasts, followed by a gentle tug on my nipples. I reached out and touched the hands, enveloping them in mine. They were rough and hairy.

"Man's hands!" the thought registered in my brain.

I did not dare open my eyes, letting the hands caress my nipples gently and then twirling between the thumb and forefinger. Yet I felt no pain, just pleasure. A moan escaped my throat, as a hand moved slowly down my body.

The fingers felt magical, bringing back memories of sex that I had deprived myself of for the last few months. The fingers seem to stop at my navel, gently probing, teasing and I shivered in anticipation of the pleasure to come. The fingers moved on, slowly, gently.

All sensation of time was suspended as I waited for the inevitable penetration.

The fingers seem to wash over my smooth mound, parting my labia. They rubbed the exposed clitoris, fingers soaking in the wetness.

Another sigh escaped my lips as I opened my thighs wider to receive the cock. I groped with my fingers and I could feel the throbbing organ, so full of life, so erect, so hard. There seemed to something familiar about that manhood.

As I spread my hands out farther in the dark, my fingers touched something that felt smooth and round.

"Balls!" I said to myself as I allowed my hands to glide over the erect organ waiting to pierce my wet cunt.

I grasped the hard, throbbing organ in my hands, hoping to guide the pleasure rod into my liquid femaleness to relieve the mounting tension and fill my hole with glutinous cum. Now I could feel him enter me, burying his erect cock deep inside me. There was a blur of pumping as my hips rose and fell in sync with the movements.

A moment of hesitation and suddenly I felt my insides boil over as I came hard, squirting the wet juice all over my thighs. In the dim light of the moon streaming through the window, I saw the smiling face of my brother Mike.

"Mike?" I gasped, shaken by the enormity of what had just transpired.

I opened my eyes and sat up, shivering in spite of the warmth. I turned on the bedside light and realized I was alone. It had been an erotic dream and my hands and fingers had acted as the cock, penetrating my now sopping cunt.

"Shit!" I cursed silently and fell back on my bed, sated, yet feeling even hornier.

Sleep did not come as I tossed and turned, trying to make sense of the most erotic dream I had ever experienced.

Finally, I gave up all notion of sleep and decided to head down to the kitchen to grab a snack and some milk, in hope of catching at least some sleep. I stepped out of the bedroom, and started heading towards the stairs leading to the kitchen when I suddenly realised I was naked. I snuck back to peek at the guest bedroom. Through the partially open door, I could hear mild snoring and I could see the recumbent form of my sleeping brother.

Satisfied that he was fast asleep, I continued on my journey down the stairs to the kitchen. I padded over to the fridge and opened the door to look at possible snacks. I settled on a scoop of ice-cream over a fruit salad and half a glass of milk. Having made up my mind I moved to grab a bowl and glass, using the dim light from the refrigerator. As I was filling up my bowl I was suddenly blinded by the kitchen light.

"Step away with hands up in the air!" the voice commanded.

I was terrified in part, but also excited knowing that I would be standing completely exposed in front of my brother. I hesitated momentarily, when the voice growled, "Get the fuck away from the fridge asshole before I crack open your skull."

I obeyed, backing away from the fridge with my hands raised and turned slowly to face my brother holding a baseball bat in his hands and with a menacing scowl on his face.

"What the hell?" his scowl turned to surprise. "What are you doing here in the middle of the night in your birthday suit Kat?"

"I came down to grab a snack," I replied. "I thought you were asleep, so didn't bother to get dressed."

"Not that I mind," he managed to crack a smile. "If you were not my sister, I would lay you down and fuck you right now."

My eyes took in his muscular bare chest and the erection threatening to escape the confines of his boxers. A red flush was creeping over his face, his breath coming in short bursts. I made no move to cover myself and stood facing him.

"Really?" I smiled pointing to his growing erection, "but your cock seems to say otherwise."

"Oh shit!" his eyes dropped down to his rising erection, "I am sorry. Let me head back up."

"Uh-uh, can I look?" I asked, moving towards him.

He looked at me in confusion.

"It's only fair, you saw me naked."

I advanced further and stuck my hand into the waist band of his boxers. I pulled them down and his smooth cock sprang free, seemingly happy to be liberated from its confines. I ran my fingers over the exposed head, and down the rigid shaft and around the balls. A drop of pre-cum made its appearance at the slit, which I wiped with my finger. I raised the finger to my nostrils, inhaling the intoxicating perfume and then ran my tongue over the finger tasting the nectar. My touch seemed to have a visible effect on my brother as his cock grew further and even more erect. I could feel my nipples harden while my labia engorged with blood and my cunt was lubricated in preparation for prolonged love making.

"It's beautiful!" I exclaimed, "and it tastes yummy."

All my brother could do was grunt. I knelt down and took him in my mouth. I teased his love shaft with my tongue, spreading my spit all over, while I massaged his hairless balls with my hands.

"Oh my God, its incredible Sis" my brother managed to spit out between his gasps.

His hands reached out and held the back of my head. I gladly obliged by moving my mouth back and forth, fucking him with my mouth. He held one of my hard nipples between his thumb and forefinger, squeezing it. His breath was coming faster as he pleaded, "Yeah baby fuck me! Fuck me faster."

My left hand snaked out to the back of his balls all the way to the crack of his ass, probing the crack for the smooth slit. I massaged his back hole, violating his asshole with a finger, while I sucked on his cock faster and faster. I felt him go rigid and suddenly it was as if a dam broke; cum came gushing out, filling my mouth. I swallowed it all avidly, hoping to suck him dry.

Slowly the surge of semen slowed to a dribble and some of his cum ran down my chin falling on the floor.

"Wow, that was some something Kat!" he gasped, adding, "let me return the favor."

I smiled, looking forward to our next few days together.

Chapter 3 - The Main Course

A thin sheen of sweat enveloped Mike's body, shimmering in the kitchen light. When he gazed at me there was a new look in his eyes, which I recognized as a mixture of lust and love.

"Let me return the favor, Kat!" Mike implored, after I had fucked him with my mouth.

Without waiting for an answer, he lay me down on the kitchen floor.

I opened my legs wide, exposing my pulsing wet cunt to his lust filled eyes.

He squatted between my legs. His hands moved gently across my face, caressing me with a feather touch. He took one of my hardened nipples between his thumb and forefinger, rolling it, squeezing it.

"Just the right size!" Mike commented as he fondled my breasts.

He ran his tongue over one firm nipple, now taking it between his teeth, biting on it.

I felt no pain, just pleasure emphasized by the moan that escaped my lips, much like my dream, except I could now feel Mike's hot breath over my face, across my neck and throat.

His hands continued their gradual descent down my body, pausing at my navel, and then moving down slowly.

I shivered in anticipation when his hands rested slightly above my pubic mound. His fingers touched it, massaging it gently, while blowing his warm breath over my bare pussy. My hips moved up in response to his caress, as if afraid to lose touch with his marauding fingers.

Mike's searching fingers lifted the hood, exposing my engorged clit. He brushed his fingers over my clit, sending waves of pleasure through me.

"Mmm," I groaned, my eyes half closed.

His fingers plunged into my dripping wet cunt, while he bowed his head and touched my clit with his tongue.

I squirmed as wave after wave of pleasure flooded my body. I moaned ecstatically, wishing the experience would go on forever.

"Beautiful," Mike murmured in my ears, "simply beautiful!"

He continued moving down, exploring my thighs, down my legs, much to my disappointment. He crouched at my feet and lifting one leg in his hands, kissed the sole of my foot, running his tongue over it, tickling me. He took my big toe into his mouth, sucking on it, bathing it with his wet spit, while his hands were kneading my smooth legs. And then he abruptly pulled my toe out with a popping noise, causing a moment of hilarity. He ran his tongue over the length of my legs; his wet tongue mixed with Mike's hot breath was seductively erotic.

My insides were churning, my breath coming in short bursts. A flash behind my closed eyelids, a million bursts of light exploding in my brain. A searing wave of heat spreading through my body, culminating in my pussy as a flood of wet cum threatened to ooze out of my cunt. I had never been more aroused.

Time appeared to stand still as slowly Mike's tongue found its target, my sopping wet cunt. His tongue invaded my slit, pumping in and out, exploring the depths of my vagina.

My hips involuntarily jerked upward, anticipating the next thrust. I met his tongue in mid-air then my hips gyrated downward, my pussy locking his tongue within its hungry lips.

Mike's tongue probed ever deeper, twisting and turning, ravaging my cunt mercilessly. He moved his tongue to my clitoris, stimulating the nub. He massaged it gently first, while I writhed in pleasure. He slipped a couple of fingers inside my pussy, moving them in circles, looking for my g-spot.

As his tongue massaged my clit, his fingers found my special spot. His fingertips moved ever so slowly teasing my g-spot. Every time he touched it, my heart raced, as I tightened my hold, reluctant to let go.

My insides churned, my whole body went rigid and I grabbed Mike's hair keeping his head close. With a sudden sigh, I released my passion in one major explosive orgasm. As my breathing gradually returned to normal and my moans subsided, I was afraid to open my eyes and find that all this was just another dream. A light nibbling on one of my earlobes, followed by a kiss caused me to reluctantly open my eyes to find a grinning Mike, his face coated with the outpourings of my joy.

The sweet smell of passion was permeating the kitchen.

"Tell me I am not dreaming!" I murmured.

"That was some orgasm Kat," Mike smiled. "You almost yanked the hair off my head."

I fumbled around, trying to raise myself. My hand stumbled onto something hard and throbbing. I squeezed it, with a smile, thinking of the pleasures that Mike's cock would give me.

"Ouch!" Mike groaned. "Don't rip my dick off too!"

"Get up baby!" I yanked on his stiff organ, "I want you inside me; fuck me hard with your big cock."

"Glad to oblige," Mike responded with a wide grin and getting to his feet.

I rose up and then went down on all fours, exposing my ass to him.

"I want you to fuck me doggie style," I hissed.

I loved being taken doggy style, but Jim, my ex-boyfriend's cock was so small that it never satisfied me. I knew that this time Mike would more than fulfill my fetish.

"You know I love your ass," Mike said as he positioned himself behind me.

I dribbled a bit of spit on my hand and grabbing his pulsing cock, spread it all over the rigid shaft. I guided the pleasure rod into my waiting wet twat.

Mike grabbed my hips and started pumping his love piston in and out of my sopping wet love tunnel.

"Faster! Harder!!" I urged feeling his cum-filled balls knock against my inner thighs. "Make me cum baby!" I moaned. "Make me cum hard!"

I could feel him go rigid, as my own passion began to boil over.

He stopped suddenly.

"What happened?" I asked in dismay, looking over my shoulder.

"Turn around Kat," Mike commanded. "I want to see your face when we cum."

I turned around, lying on my back and spreading my thighs wide open.

Mike penetrated me again, his monstrous shaft easily entering my wet cunt.

I embraced him; holding on to his butt cheeks as he pumped urgently and my hips gyrated in perfect harmony with him. I could feel him tense, as his strokes slowed and became more intense my body was racing towards the big "O".

The dam burst and Mike's seed pulsated into me while I gripped him tighter, desperate for sweet release. Our love juices mingled, and as Mike withdrew from me our sticky melange slowly seeped down my thighs.

Mike fell down beside me, exhausted by his powerful orgasm.

I embraced him again, showering him with kisses.

"I love you Kat," he whispered into my ear as my eyes fluttered closed.

======================

The first rays of morning sun penetrated my eyelids and I opened my eyes slowly. I wondered where I was as I took stock of the strange surroundings and the warm body beside me. I sat up with a start when I realized that I was still in the kitchen and my brother Mike was lying next to me. I stood up, yawning and stretching the stiffness away.

My thighs were still coated with the dried crusts of our love making. I filled the kettle and turned it on, heading to the bathroom to relieve myself. As I raised myself off the toilet to wipe off the last droplets of pee and cum, Mike barged in, pinching the tip of very erect cock with his fingers.

"Gotta go," he announced gritting his teeth.

I had barely gotten out of the way, when he let loose a stream of yellowish liquid, relief written all over his face.

We burst out laughing.

"I need to take a shower," I announced. "Why don't you join me?"

"Great idea; reduce water waste," he responded smiling.

We stepped under the shower rinsing off the caked cum stains from my body. What began as soaping and rinsing each other's bodies culminated in love making in the shower.

Over the course of the week of his stay with me, Mike and I made love in every room in the house including outside in the backyard. It was a tearful goodbye at the airport, but we both knew that this was not the last of our new found love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
WOW, I didn't know...

...you could bypass editor review of submissions by posting them in comments.

OleguyOleguyover 12 years ago
Love your work

I am also gob-smacked by the stunning photo in your biography.

Ain't I a dirty old man.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
good, glad you gave them another chapter

cute couple, hot sex, nice romantic story, well written thanks

quietman200quietman200over 10 years ago
Good but short

This was really erotic but it was too short. Your story telling is good and your erotic imagery is really good, but it seemed rushed somehow. Take your time like you would want to if it were you living out this story. You have some good stuff here. Make us want more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
what a waste of time

three piss poor stories that are so short they should have been one chapter. IF you have any brains you will delete the series and repost it as one chapter and you need to EDIT IT BEFORE REPOSTING.

PantiespinkPantiespinkalmost 7 years ago
Sex

When someone loves you, it feels good to love them back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
???

how do you fuck with your mouth? is kissing fucking, is sucking a tit fucking? lesbians say licking and fingering is fucking, NOT!

Lust4heragainLust4heragainabout 4 years ago
Love it

Always love it when two satisfied people are loving each other and enjoying sex together.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
uservenus_can@venus_can
Update 03/01 - Finally starting to write again. I thank the readers for taking the time to read my stories and (often) providing constructive feedback. I love to make new virtual friends, so feel free to send me he-mails. If it is not rude or crude, I do respond. Please be pa...