All Comments on 'A Midnight Walk'

Nice simple little story - love to see what you do next.

Incredible read! Really got me turned on without being raunchy. Very sensual and detailed. I could picture myself meeting a soon to be new friend of my own in this way! Hope you'll do more stories. :)

This was not too bad, but the long first-person narrative makes it more than boring, it puts the reader to sleep. Next story, or a re-write of this one, think seriously of adding dialogue. He said, I said, they said,.... keeps a story moving along and with dialogue, you can say those hot, nasty, delicious words to jolt the reader into feeling sexy and aroused and horny.