All Comments on 'A Milky MILF'

This is a good short read, you could follow this in so many ways, love the milk :-)

Without some kind of characterization beforehand, this effort leaves me cold. I need to be able to fix actual lifelike people in my head to think it's actually happening or else it's just so many words on the screen. There's a comparable difference between erotic and medical photography of the same subject matter. You described a one-page sex scene that was clinical but not erotic because it was like two anatomically correct androids having an encounter. There was no actual "he" or "she" behind those pronouns - all just swatches of standard sex words and phrases from any number of soft porn novels.

Build some characters and try again.

PLEASE check the story for homonyms and grammar errors and then resubmit it...

This is an erotic fever-dream of a story. Very hot!