All Comments on 'A Million to One'

Perfect Story!!!

I hope you will add more to this loving adventure of Mom and Son.

I loved every word. And thanks for the anal action and a normal pussy.

I agree! That was a perfect mom/son story!! If I could give it ten stars, I would! It was so well written, I felt like I was in the room with them.

Nice setup, build-up, and consummation. And a sweet "I'm home" zinger of an ending. What more could a loving son ask for? ;-)

Thanks for this one and the many wonderful tales that you've shared here.

loved it. the tease was brilliantly drawn out

i legitimately think you're the best writer on the site in this genre right now. I LOVE all the build up, all the voyeuristic views in this....thank you!

LOVE the carrot. Great story - as usual. 5 stars

There's enough for a sequel!

The carrot was good. Great story.

Thanks for reading and the encouraging words.

Son didn't eat his Mommy's pussy, didn't rate

To Joo2, yeah it's there. Last page.

Thank you Author. I loved it.

Great story as always. Good build up. Not to long not to short (that's what she said). Always look forward to a new story from you.

The hidden carrot was a winner. Had me laughing at her creativity in order to get her son to take the step.The story was full of her little charades, but there was also the reasonable doubt for Will that it wasn't a come-on. When you step over the line, there's no do over. Well done and every bit a five star story.

I give all anal stories if I like them 3 stars. I don't like anal...

time reading this one, Sunbury! Wonderful story! I'd give it another five stars if I could!

WOW you did it agane you made me nut thanks 100% HOT

Great reading and setup to a amazing ending.

Excellent story. I love the mother in this one. She is probably crazy and I'm absolutely fine with that.

Best ending I've read in a long time.

Bravo.

5 stars.

5 stars again. I pictured him doing her doggy and stuffing the carrot up her arse to teach her a lesson

Hilarious, funny, erotic, hot, romantic and in case I haven't mentioned, hilarious. I love the mom character in this one. Oh how I wish she'd be real and I was her son!

Is there a part 2?

Wonderful story............():\

Your stories are witty and yet very sexy. Sorry you have quit posting.

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Very erotic even absent the incest

Loved it. Especially the bush. Yummy

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