All Comments on 'A Mischief Ch. 02'

Look, English is not my native language. But I at least try not to write stories in a language I don't fully command. You shouldn't do either, because I don't think you are up to the task.

Regards,

Umberto

A very sexy and erotic story,you do need to edit this a little,but I do like most of the text,its exactly like the english that is spoken by my Indian friends .I bet you are quite sexy?

I have read thousands of grammatically correct pages from fiction and non-fiction categories and let me confess, many of these are of no worthwhile literary worth. What I feel that, language is the tool to express the subject, it is not the end product. If a weak literary work can express the subject matter strongly, then it surpasses the language barrier.

Please keep on writing, self professed guardians of language should not be allowed to restrict a good theme to see the light of the day.

i think its hot and the non pretentius english narrative adds its own rustic charm....cheers

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