All Comments on 'A Miserable Pile of Secrets Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
The ending in the beginning

I read your intro & actually think that you are off to a great start! The lead in gave us Arthur's hidden urges and the ending gave us a hint of Vince's intriguing abilities. I am intrigued enough to hanker for a chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

LMAO that Sims 4 TEA!

curiousaudreycuriousaudreyalmost 3 years ago

So Vince is a sociopath chile but I like him but then you did tell us how it ends tragically. I'll enjoy the ride regardless.

I as a young black woman love that Arthur has a snooty roommate who is not his sassy black friend.

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