by DreamerByTheDiamonds
I read your intro & actually think that you are off to a great start! The lead in gave us Arthur's hidden urges and the ending gave us a hint of Vince's intriguing abilities. I am intrigued enough to hanker for a chapter 2.
So Vince is a sociopath chile but I like him but then you did tell us how it ends tragically. I'll enjoy the ride regardless.
I as a young black woman love that Arthur has a snooty roommate who is not his sassy black friend.