All Comments on 'A Misplaced Letter'

Your best story. I loved it.

Oh my gosh, wonderful. I loved it. I got so caught up in it I forgot to breath, and that wasn't the sex. Please write more like this.

It took me a couple of pages to get into the story, but it was worth the effort!

-the number of times i threw up my hands and was like...TELL HER ALREADY!

-the number of times i let out an OH MY GOD!

-the number of times I almost threw something.....minus one.

With some polishing this could be a really beautiful read.

I started reading this submission once before, but quit because of all of the errors. I decided to try again, and the story has some good bones, but it needs just a little more work.

I think if you found yourself an editor then this would become a 5 star story!

....I thought @ the beginning that these were supposed to be a couple of adults! Then come to find out they are two immature cowards afraid to talk! So lost in their own lost little worlds that they make themselves sick but assuming what the other one thinks or feels!!! Yike!! lol