All Comments on 'A Mistress Submits to Hated Rivals'

Truly one of my favorites on the site here. I hope you continue.

I was suprised to see you continued it, fucking great, dont know how u think up this stuff, but plz continu give Lucy her revenge on the 2.

Love the Mistress Lucy character.

Hope you keep up the storyline and have her getting her revenge.

This one really needs a follow up. This is some good writing. Thanks for sharing.

How the mighty fall

Violence for the sake of violence is not erotic; nor is racism erotic.

Miyoko found herself bound and staring into the eyes of a very angry Lucy. What? You thought Lucy would run away? She waited until late a night, broke a small piece of glass to gain entry, got dressed and got all her stuff together, then paid Miyoko a visit. She left her bloody and bleeding with the warning never to contact Lucy again. Your lack of thought about Lucy just accepting what had happened was ludicrous. This was poorly thought out and badly written.

Is it possible to write and tell us how lucy ended up ?

Please let us know where Lusy got to ,did she come crawling to be a slave or did she get her revenge ?

I'm so glad to finally have found a story about a Mistress turned sub. They are rare here and it was a wonderful story

What ever happened Lucy did she ever make it back ?

would love to her the follow up please