All Comments on 'A Model Cousin Pt. 05'

He didn't even wash his hands

I just want them to fuck already. Omg. It’s killing me.

Your style is good, timing is awesome, and descriptions are hot.

Once in awhile you leave out a word, which breaks the flow. A second set of eyes would help.

Keep writing. I think you have real talent, but what do I know.

Does no one proof your articles? A great example of how to take a good story and turn it into trash. Don't turn in material that is not serious edited for all errors!!

The story is 50/50. The structure and pace are usually good. I really liked the buildup and immediately got invested in the characters. But the psychology is just too wonky for it to work. You get tired of both the main characters.

The protagonist is too passive and lame. If the cousin is hot, she would have other prospects with better social skills, and wouldn't stay with this wimp who doesn't make any move on her. And if the guy really is talented, he wouldn't let the girl run the whole operation, get everything she wants, and not demand anything in return. I'm sorry, but the scenario as it has played out doesn't leave any room for them to respect each others.

Well done the 5th chapter now read. Looking forward to the next one. If I could write such stories I would be very pleased.... So don't worry about minor script mistakes, I struggle to write a simple letter and always mix up you and your all the time.

As said, looking forward to the next chapter.

Please please please! Release part six! The anticipation is making my pussy so wet!

Waiting for part 6

Part 6???! Pretty please? We can’t wait!

You gotta give us part six.

can we have part six please?

You're Killing us with waiting! Spicy story!

Where's part 6????

.....and the wait is killing us.

Please, don't keep us waiting much more, PLEASE !

Rapier

Im kinda expecting that people will wait and wait then forget about it

Please publish the next chapter!!!

Great series so far. Please continue.

What’s taking so long

Thank you all for being patient. Part 6 will be up shortly.

I will hate to see this series end.

I do hope that if this is the end, it will end with the 2 of them together.

Hopefully both will admit to loving each other and working together.