All Comments on 'A Model Sister'

Now that you have written this story, you need to go back and tell us about Mrs. Jennings. Then, maybe have them hook up with her.

Needs to walk in on them and join in .

definitely a 5. sorry about the 4. I clicked too soon

Let's see where this goes.

Sexy and good writing.

Great story and there needs to be more with Lisa also.

Or even with the parents??

5 Stars got me hard fast.

Is Clara really on birth control, or was she merely saying that. more chapters, please!

Hope you have a Spring Break SPECIAL planned.

A very erotic story

Not bad however, the sex needs to be more descriptive.

Very hot and nicely written.

Loved it ! Very visual description and easy to place a brother and sister together.

Thanks

I am not sure if you relating a real life story or one in the ether. It was a good story, but it was kind of squashed in the first few words when you put this "Having a hot (half) sister " When the word Half / Step get put in it kills the erotic mood. I still enjoyed the story but there are my thoughts.

stunning great start good flow and great finish. would love to see what happens over break

A very enjoyable story and hot as well, would like to hear more about this couple :)

But there is ZERO incest in this story. They could legally marry any where in the world.

A half sister/brother has one parent in common with the other.

Should've had the brother fuck Lisa.

story, from you! Thanks Origins, I loved it!

Well, I have always been a mom and son fan,

but it looks like i'll add sis and bro to my reading.

This was hot, PLEASE!!! keep it up.

..THANKS.. OH YA 5*****

USAF

Loved it and want more.

I do hope there will be a part 2 ?

Rapier

Needs to be more

Beautifully written, but, I'm hoping the story ends here. Thanks for not doing anal. Big turnoff for me.

CINCO ESTRELLAS ***** !

Great story thanks.

This showed up in random stories. One of the best short stories.

What a fun picture. I think Lisa should fuck him and make it an orgy!

Hope you add a second adventure. Add Mom into the next chapter.

Have Mom catch them and then join in the party.

Omg absolutely fucking sucking wonderful, so love the cunnilingus descriptions. I absolutely adore cunt in every way and getting drunk on cunt juice. I love the word Cunt it is what every woman has between her legs. Love to eat cunt while fucking another. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Other than her lying to him since she did tell him that Lisa only knew him to be her friend...it was actually rather hot and sweet at the same time <3 I loved it!

Loved it!

Well, it is legal for step brothers and step sisters to marry so what's not to love with this story? Didn't take much arm twisting to get Marcus naked and fucking his step sister, but then who could blame him?

good stuff