All Comments on 'A Modern Christmas Carol'

The initial part of your story painting an uncomfortably vivid picture of the aimlessness and despair in Chris' life was extremely well done and a worthy beginning to a much longer effort. In contrast, the latter part of the story seemed to happen far too quickly and IMHO the continuity of the tale suffered. I just didn't want the story to end as quickly as it did. Please continue to write.

Redemption works, short and sweet. Thank you