by Jimyfoxx
You lost me on page 3. Where you changed from one to the other. It was a good story till that I didn't even go to page 4. This is written on the change sorry
I agree with @Whome1578. That is very good story but you lost me when the mother had to hide from being with her son's friend. They were supposed to share everything... It's a pity as it was a very exciting story.
I agree. This story is great but could have been better without this suddent change. The boys were supposed to share everything.