by jameswhich
Good grief! Either get a proof reader/editor or give it up. The first half of the first page was more than I could tolerate.
Pitiful
This is somewhat of a slow paced story, but I think that it will be worth to keep reading. What I would like is more raw sex, the good old sloppy hot hard sex between the mother and son. Is there going to be anything sexual happen between the daughter and father? That would be a sweet twist for the mother, to be holding out not having sex with the son, and then find out the father is doing the daughter.I'll be looking for the next chapter.Rich
I simply loved the story....the emotion and love involved. You need to be a little patient but it's totally worth the time spent reading it..... Different from raw sex.... More like a very interesting and involving story.......
that "hot irons" refers to what boys have between their legs that's hot and very hard for what their mother's got between her legs. Nothing makes a boy's cock nearly as hard as the prospect of sticking it up the same cunt he came out of.