by clive2007
Excellent story! I can't wait for part 2! I thoroughly enjoyed the development of the characters and the battle that is being waged inside Virginia's mind about how to handle her son. Kudos to you!
I just finished reading this story and was left feeling good and wanting to read more. I confess that I haven't read, at least I don't remember reading, any of your previous stories. I fully intend to get busy and rectify that oversight. I look forward to getting to read the next segment of this story.
Job well done!
You have me completely caught up in your story! Wonderful writing and developing of the characters. I too intend to read more of your stories!
Job Well Done!
You have the beginnings of a first-rate incest romance.
I've only got a couple of quibbles- first, why must the dad be an ogre?
Second, while I salute the nods to reality, maturity, and common sense of the son eventually moving on from mom to a marriageable partner, but I crave the flagrantly deranged wonder of Oedipal taboo-breaking indulged to its fullest!
You've got me panting for the next chapter, so to your labors, o author, and grace us with another chapter of Sean and his mom!!!
This is a very well crafted story. I like the lead in and the initial, tentative moves between Mom and Son. I like the first person narrator and the Mom point of view. I hope that this series results in Mom achieving the self fulfillment she is looking for and I am glad that she found it in her son. Keep this sweet series going!
AnHoa Rifleman
Very well written and love the way each sentence flows into the next. Readers are treated to the lust, love and need of the mom and son.
eagerly looking forward to the next chapters.
Venus
Well written and edited along with being very erotic.
A good amount of background information to build the characters on, plus a very believable erotic storyline.
I liked that she had an undesirable sexual encounter before coming home to her loving son making her realize that she has a gentle man at home, and how the sexual tension is building up between mother and son.
Thanks for the good read.
no one to like. Her ex, her married cheating date, her needy demanding who is can't even touch her without pawing and mauling her.
I enjoyed this story. I appreciate character and plot development. I like stories that can/could be related to real world situations and circumstances. The sexual activities were realistic and probable. Good work. Hope Ch. 02 and other to be chapters are as well developed and written.