All Comments on 'A Most Forbidden Dream'

Hmmm! definitely in the realms of unusual, but very good, really not the ending is was expecting. Please keep it going.

Well Done

Handyman2

One of the best stories I have ever read...a wonderful accomplishment !!!....Please...more ???

I have never seen a double wide trailer with a second floor!

Great story a little long, but you need to continue with his Adventures!

Excellent story, can't wait for the next adventure. Well done!

Lol

That was extremely erotic and also extremely well written. The 'only' problem I had was that the biography reading at the beginning pretty much gave away the entire plot line of what was to happen. Still looking forward to reading the second part though!

Excellent! I really enjoyed your awesome story. Great choice of words and a pleasant and attractive storyline. Please continue with more luscious chapters.

Thanks for this unique and playful story.