All Comments on 'A Most Graceful Life Ch. 05'

by CJMcCormick

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Perfect mix of erotica and description

Incredible story. Please keep going with this, as it’s become one of my favourite stories on the site!

Horseman68Horseman68about 4 years ago
So Good.

This story just gets better and better. A very appealing touch in the dialogue that is so well written. More bravos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nice story so far... a few grammatical errors but that's okay

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

I love genie stories!!!

warm_n_quietwarm_n_quietalmost 2 years ago

Please consider asking an Editor to read your work. The ideas are great but need a critical review. Thanks,

Please keep writing, one way or another. - WnQ

ProgamermoveProgamermove11 months ago

In what wacky alternate universe could stacking shelves ever be considered sexy lmao

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Long time, no talk! I'm still around and still writing. I had someone reach out to see if I was still alive, and I very much am. I no longer write under the CJ McCormick pen name though, and I have migrated to using three new pens. I won't be posting to Literotica any lo...