by CJMcCormick
The story has grown since the first chapter, the characters are all well fleshed out.
It's my sincere hope that you don't stumble and make a mess, I have seen plenty of writers here rush towards the end. And it all just becomes a big mess, which makes the reader go "meh sucks".
Very well thought-out through all of the chapters so far. Well written and presented.
CJ seriously dude you are now my favorite author on Literotica. I'm going to get through 7 and 8 tonight can't wait to see this one through to the end. My previous favorite author wrote a story that took 6 years yes Years to finish sometimes waited a whole year for a new chapter. Thank you for this story.
Wasn't one of the rules that Grace can't use her magic for other beings? How could she use it for Stephen's mother? Also, how could she do it without the wish being linked to sex?
Excellent read so far. I hope the next chapter is as captivating as this one!