All Comments on 'A Most Graceful Life Ch. 07'

I hop you don’t spend too much time on the bad guys. Thanks.

An erotic tale on a porn website that has a plot and not just sex.

You’ve got a great imagination and a very clever way with words;

“Grace wore a dark black blazer that covered up her torso and was buttoned once in the front. That poor button, thought Stephen, as it struggled to contain Grace's impressive chest.”

That description and faux sympathy for the poor struggling button was spot on. It’s that kind of attention to detail that brings a story to life.

Looking forward to reading more, thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

This story is my favorite spin on the "Genie Genre" by far. Keep it up non-conventional maestro!

I really appreciate how much time you take to craft and edit your writing. It's a lot of work, and we are the lucky recipients. Well done and very entertaining.

I really enjoy this book, the dichotomy of cute adorable genie vs raunchy sex genie is fun, and I've genuinely laughed a few times at her antics, my only complaint is that she was SUCH a stickler that they had to follow rules, she brought it up multiple times, yet one of the rules was space the wishes out, for safety. But it seems like every 45 seconds he's wishing for some random thing. He doesn't wanna do laundry so he wishes for clean sheets, wishes to get hard again, wishes for privacy, wishes for this wishes for that. It's been like two days and he's probably made two dozen wishes, just seems a little counter Intuitive to how much she stressed spacing them out.

Other than that, great read.

Really liking this series. Glad I favorited this Author and I don't use the word 'Author' lightly. I most story tellers because that's all they are. 5 GREAT BIG & FAT STARS!

Interesting fantasy, well written. Ramjet.