All Comments on 'A Most Graceful Life Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nope!

You set down the rules for the wishes early on in the story and now you’re changing it up so that she can provide wishes that have nothing to do with Stephen at all! Also the genie used magic that morning, what the hell was the warden doing? Was he in a temporary coma or something?🙄

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great Series

Great series so far! It's been an enjoyable read and a well written story line, hopefully you will keep it going for a while.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Kill the Warden

I know you have to have some Drama in here which I do like but I love This couple so kill the Warden lol.

Seriously you are the best CJ

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hey Anon 06/29/19

Technically Stephen’s wish for his cousin Shelley (sp?) is viable, she’s part of his extended family. The wish was to make her and her husband have a long happy marriage -> marriage includes sex -> result effects Stephen by default because she’s family.

After all if your favourite cousin married a rapist serial killer that’s going to have a profound effect on your own health and well-being. We’re talking about a frikkin’ genie, try a little suspension of disbelief.

As for the grouchy warden meh he’s having quite a few problems trying to blend in with the cliché of decadent capitalist westerners. 😉

Horseman68Horseman68about 4 years ago
Continues To Delight.

This is a great read. Very endearing couple. Need to have things work out well for them. Bravos.

RRC2RRC2over 3 years ago

Uncle Rob is my hero!!!

:-)

Thanks

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

So far an excellent story. All 5 stars for each chapter!

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