All Comments on 'A Mother and Daughter Pt. 05-06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Nice writing but for me the story was too fast and unrealistic compared to the last part.

chytownchytownabout 5 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Good

But got confused as to the contortions Linda needed to have her legs over his shoulders whilst lying prone on the bed. Must have missed her being rolled over onto her back.

Shame about the last sentence, what a spoiler. You should have added a note not to read the last sentence if you don't like spoilers.

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