All Comments on 'A Mother and Son Escape Ch. 02'

Keep it going! Nice lil cliff hanger there. I can see this playing out in at least 2 more installments.

Keep going you are doing great. I agree this was a good way to leave us in suspense. Can't wait for the next installment.

Oh ho a cliff hanger staying tuned in for the next episode.. Same Story Time, Same Story Channel.............

don't stop now

Longer chapters please.

Thanks <:/)

Love the pace. Keep it going.

come on im waiting for the follow up this is good

Keep up the great story!

More please and longer chapters if possible would be great.

You have a knack for storytelling. I enjoyed it to this point, but if you want to take your writing to the next level, you MUST get an editor, or at least another writer to help you clean up the obvious mistakes that detract your reader's attention from the plot (Like I'm one to talk. My own writing got much better when I found someone to help me edit my stories prior to posting them).

Anyway, I am enjoying the story. Keep it up.

Gina

wow this is becomeing a better story as we go on and I thank you for the time and efort you must putt in to a story like this but you need to know that you have a great tallent for wrighting storys and keepping them going ,a score of five is never high enuph for storys like this one so I would say give you a score of 45 I have not finished the story yet the more I read the higher your score goeup on story line apeal and desire for more of the story .that is how I deside how I score storys . I thatnkyou fro shareing all of you gift with us in the publick this is my fave web sight, from DC newrancher. I love storys were the son becomes the man and takes care of his mother .

She needs to go to the nearest police station. File a report using the text message and joint statements. Then a solicitor. Visit the bank. And get out of town or get a restraining order against Jim

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Still not much to it 3 stars

Getting a little better just 3 stars