All Comments on 'A Mother and Son Forced'

Doesn’t make any sense whatsoever. 6th degree black belt and he surrenders to a guy with a gun…. Disarming an armed assailant is elementary level stuff. This is merely one of the many utterly insipid logical breaks in this chaotic mess. Thus the utterly fails to convince the reader to properly suspend disbelief.

Epic fail 2 stars.

Good story and great ending! That last interchange between Pete and art is priceless!

Cheers

SAGE

Good story.But a 20 yr old Just can't have a 6th degree black belt.Not enough time spent at it.He'd be a 3rd degree at most,unless it changed.

That was a fun read.

I found it very arousing to be honest

Good story, but 6th Dan Black Belt in 3 years, is impossible, since there is requirement of at least 2 years between each Dan in Tae Kwon Do; plus the time to reach Black Belt in the first place... In Korea, it would take even longer.

Fucking epic.

HHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!

Totally fucking stupid, but entertaining and it did have a happy ending!!

Yeah, 6th degree black belt, at his age, even if he started as a child isn't possible. I started at 28, retired at 50, tested and passed as soon as I was eligible. My instructor is a Korean National champion, so he's good. I only made it to 4th degree. My instructor is 7th, and he's 5 years older than me and started at 8 years old. Of course, the only reason he isn't higher is because he doesn't want to make the trip back to Korea to test. Yeah, you gotta go to Korea to test for 8th, 9th or 10th.

Studying Tae Kwon Do for 3 years, if you're good, you're ready to test for 2nd degree. Test for, not be yet.

It tickles me that of the 7k words in this story, my critics prefer to criticize the two sentences referring to Tae Kwon Do.

Can't help wondering how pete got on . . .

Perhaps another story . . ?

This was a crazy but fun read. Good to see Liv and Russ enjoying each other despite how it started for them.

You must've watched a lot of Jerry Springer to come up with the Pete character. That guy was so stupid I can't understand what Liv saw in him.

Absolutely hilarious. Nice to read a story about a dumb dude rather than the female.

5 stars all day long.

Also, servant111 needs to get a life. I don't think he has said a positive thing about ANY story. If he doesn't like them, than why the hell is he on this site? And NO, I haven't written anything; I am NOT a writer and prefer to read other people's work.

ROTFLMAOOOOO 5 stars just for that.

I've never been one to like forced/coerced erotica, but Pete and Art were so stupid and homophobic that I couldn't help but laugh and enjoy. I've always enjoyed your work and this was a nice short fun tale, Thanks for Sharing.

If you think that only when you specifically say "Tae Kwon do" are your only references to it, then you have some issues with your thinking processes.

hysterically enjoyable, always love your works

That was a fun story, I enjoyed it very much. I have to say that I hope Art and Pete either one never have any kids! LOL

Very good and I loved the retribution delivered to Pete. I would have liked Russ to deliver some heartfelt blows to Pete in front of his mom so she could enjoy the treatment as well. One concern: if mom has a very poor judgement in selecting her partners, is she making another bad decision about her and Russ?

5*

BJ

I love it when the bad guy gets his due.

Yes 5 stars made me laugh. Was hoping russ would see to him but the outcome was even better

You're my new favorite author. Thanks for this good and witty novel.

We’ll…that was certainly different!

Excellant!!

I took an instant and total dislike to Pete as soon as we met him. He's the epitome of the kind of man I hate: a narrow minded, loud mouthed drunk asshole.

I was really hoping for Russ to quickly get the upper hand of a bad situation and kick the livin shit out of Pete, as that's what he deserved after the first time a called Russ a faggot.

However, your outcome was far, far better!

Pete's becoming the guest of honor at a tube steak party was pretty tasty indeed.

It's also reminiscent of the Police Academy movie where one of Mausers inept henchmen finds himself trapped....while naked....at a leather gay bar late at night. (Oh, BUGGER! Does anyone have any tampons?)

What a great story! Thank you for writing it, and I hope there's a part two some day!

Sincerely,

B4PW.

this was god damned hilarious. and a good read

Glad he got what was coming to him however your wrong on 1 account your not born gay nor are you born straight it's a choice that 1 makes for whatever reason but it's still a choice that was made cause I said you are neither born gay or straight you make that choice later in life sometimes subconsciously and sometimes consciously I don't know why people think being gay or straight isn't a choice when it is

Well overall it is a good story however you are wrong on 1 account rather you are gay or not is a choice one makes cause when you are born you are not interested in either male or female that is a decision you make later rather subconsciously or consciously some choose to be bi some don't even choose

So now we celebrate gay rape? Two wrongs don't make a right.

Too bad for Pete could've gone in a little more detail what happened to him

Poor old Pete. Bet when he farts from now on it won't even make any noise . . . .

@Anonymus' comment between PhoenixLore and Darkness:

That's just the same old hypocrisy characteristic of many of the activists who like to call others bigots with inflationary frequency.

To a_reader_from_germany i actually have to agree with the anon it does hint that its a gay rape however after the shit the guy pulled and how he act to begin with me personally would say he got off fucking light