All Comments on 'A Mother Loves Her Son'

A very hot story! Your story brings back many memories.

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Excellent job! Loved every minute of it and you left it well open for another chapter, which I certainly hope you write.

Very Sexy Story! Love the teaching aspect, the Mom's openness, and the GFs desire to learn. I think Mom could give them a few more lessons.. don't you?

That was so fuckin' hot, need more!!

Was that exciting

It was one of the better stories I've read here. Very nicely building in eroticism from beginning to end. The premise isn't wholly preposterous, unlike many of the incest stories which start with a relationship that isn’t incestuous and suddenly jumps into raunchy sex between a mother-son, etc., which clearly defines a fantasy as opposed to a possibility. I’d love to read a continuation of this story. There are several possibilities to explore: Why is the girlfriend’s mother so uptight? Will her mother confront any of them about their activities, and what will happen then? What will happen when mom or son focuses some attention on her ass (the source of her panic attacks)? Will the mother remain involved with them if/when they proceed to intercourse? Will the mother demonstrate the sexuality of the ass by first demonstrating anal sex on her son? Endless story-lines you could pursue. I hope to read additional chapters when you’ve settled on where to go from here.

...among the most erotic stories EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR posted on here, and I've been reading stories on here for YEARS!<BR>Sure, there were a few misspellings, but overall it was SPELLBINDING!<BR>GREAT STORY!

Let's see a part 2, to where it progresses to all out intercourse and then some.

The best I've read in a long time! More please

You did a great JOB , its a First for you here,

Before my mom passed away she showed me how to masturbate

even gave me a toy, I wished she could showed me more

But God took her to heaven..

I do hope we all are lucky to see more on this Submission and many more others to cumm your a GREAT writer!!!

Lisa

PS my finger got very wet!

This is the most erotic story I have ever read!!!!!

Mom should have went down on the girl to show her son how to eat pussy, then taught the girl the same.

Great story!

AWESOME!!!!

An excellent, well written tale, with a great twist and perfect description! Bring on the next episode soonest please!

Should be the answere for the question after a following part. Despite this fabulous story already worked for me two times there's still so much demand to get to know the rest of this invitation. I wish for you much time and joy to write on since there couldn't be any doubt of talent or ideas. Great work!

Excellent story, original concept. However, it would have been good to proof-read and get rid of the typos.

I do have to question what mom (even in fantasy) would disrobe and show her son's gf how to suck cock and her son how to fingerfuck his gf's pussy. While the story is meant to be fantasy...I just don't see it happening--especially since we don't get a build-up to know the mom is this kind of exhibitionist.

Really enjoyed this story. I'd like to read about the next time she comes over. :)

good

come again with another part? We're up for more!

This absolutely needs another chapter.

an Absolute amazing story, which is one of the best if not the best stories on literotica, thankyou for sharing it with the world and i would love to see a follow up story as it seems like the trio have unfinished business if you know what i mean :P

Definitely enjoyed this - would agree with previous comment that it is one of the best here

One of the very best, I loved it. Thanks

wow!! i usually speed read these stories,,,so much chaff in with the wheat,,,,,but slowed down with this sex tale and then was reading every word and rereading every word!!! i really enjoyed this so very,very much!! thank you!! great background, it built slowly, had good tension, very powerful,erotic sex!! loved it, actually,,,,

sitting here with a hard on 99% of this story.......well done

at work today,,,liked it so much,,,i came home and read it again today!!

It has been said the best writing is when your mind sees the pictures....BOY DID I SEE THEM .... Great story....and I agree, next chapter...the three way aspect of this is spellbinding...awesome write............

My god this is so hot

SHOULD BE MORE INCEST !

Hey - Are there going to be any more stories by you?? Sure hope so.

needs a sequel

This was amazing. Love the slow build. Please write more

please more ......

Mother should teach son to eat pussy and then both of them do the girlfriend.

Mother Harlan got the sexual ball rolling for her son and his girlfriend. I couldn't help but feel she should have done some tutoring of her son before Josephine came over. She's a hot librarian who's lacking some pussy gratification herself, and she's inviting a boob groping by not wearing a bra. Mother needs to show Robert her love by training him to be the best lover he can be for her, or anyone else.

Great read, loved the tension build up and the lesson being taught! I look forward to more writing from you! Thank you!

One of my favs. You need to continue the story.

There needs to be a continuation.

Needs a part 2.

A very good take on the Moms Teach Sex porn genre.

This really does deserve more parts. Top of the range in erotic story telling. Love it.

I rarely give a 5, this is a 5.

More please...do them both, then anal...mom wants anal

Lovely story, the author is to be congratulated!

Keep up the good work.

HOT and SEXY read. Thanks for sharing.

I appreciate all the comments, suggestions, and critque.

I had no idea that this story would have as many people read it as they have. It is good to see people getting enjoyment and satisfaction from the read.

Very well written bar a few mistakes. Just a great story.

Wonderfully erotic.

Great story as far as it went. He never did get around fucking either his mother or Jo so I'm not sure if a simple BJ constitutes incest. Definitely needs a follow on chapter . . . .