All Comments on 'A Mother Returned Pt. 02'

Not one of your best works.

Felix has definitively had something changed in her, but he didn't think of all of the repercussions in what he did. I have a feeling it's going to spiral out of his control.

It's hard to feel like there's a person to root for in this story so far, though. There's not much to make us like any of them.

3-6 should be scraped and you should learn to write. Get a life and a better hobby

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I've always found your works to be very enjoyable and good reads. I'm finding this story a lot harder to stay focused on. I have pretty similar thoughts to those posted by shadracht below.... and i hate to say it but i agree with silvermire as well... :(

I think this one is going to be a slow burn. Your works are usually excellent and enjoyable but this one is taking so getting used to. I live in hope.

Did not like this it does not have any incest and the story line sucks 2 stars

Enjoyed the read quite a bit. I love slow vurns and i love that theres some mystery as to whats happening with penelope.

Excited to see this story ramp up in the same way enkis puzzle does.

I think the negativity is coming from horned up people looking to release and not having a ton in these 2 chapters to masturbate to.

Wanted to spread some positivity

This seems like it will be great fun. Greetings from the Bard.

If imagining Teddy's big ugly cock made Penelope cum hard, just imagine what it would feel like for him to be fucking her pussy for real.