All Comments on 'A Mother's Change? Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent Start!

I can't wait to see where this one goes to. Excellent start and so many avenues to go to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Interesting start, I hope that the following chapters are longer, but great work so far.

MrLurkerMrLurkerover 12 years ago

An evil blue glowing orb that vanishes, You have

been watching 'Heavy Metal' lately haha.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Nice start

This story could go so many ways.

I think it will be fun to see what the author has in store for us.

Thanks for the interesting start.

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