by asecret69
I can't wait to see where this one goes to. Excellent start and so many avenues to go to.
Interesting start, I hope that the following chapters are longer, but great work so far.
An evil blue glowing orb that vanishes, You have
been watching 'Heavy Metal' lately haha.
This story could go so many ways.
I think it will be fun to see what the author has in store for us.
Thanks for the interesting start.