All Comments on 'A Mother's Change? Ch. 02'

This chapter could have been a bit longer and not so rushed. Good start though, looking forward to see where all of it leads.

Hot beginning, fair writing! A little proof-reading or outside editing may help, but I didn't find the errors terribly distracting. Though the plot scheme seems familiar, there is much room for series development. Thanks, and keep writing!

this thing is almost as short as a comic strip

Hope to see many more chapters!!

That was so hot. Dam had my cock dripping. Please write more.

I certainly hope that she makes both of her kids her lovers.

Thanks for the read.