by James_Steele
I really liked this story! I really hope you keep it going! Maybe some anal and impregnation ;)
All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex, a friend is a bonus.
I bet a toned-down version of this is quite commonplace. If the desire is mutual and they both are adults, why not?
Would be good to see him knock both women up, giving Elise a son of her own.
The title says it all - a part 2, please, please!
I have always said Mom and Son is the best, but with Elise as a back up, this kid has it made for life. Lets have more of this story PLEASE.............Thanks for the read
More, please, it was so hot, i hope Elise got pregnant and Ricky should knock Diane up too, they are so perfect for him.
A very hot and awesome beginning. This is begging for a part 2 with more hot fun and a much needed threesome!!
great story
I have a friend who is a girl and i know from one of her family members that she use to have real sex with her father in her early 20's and i have been curious about it but don't know how to bring it up or ask questions about it. would love to know how it started and who made the first move
That was the best story I’ve read on here in a long time, thank you!
Plot was original i think that's what I liked most. great story, hope there is more to come think you have a good idea on your hands.
Very well written. The interactions were a bit repetitive, I thought. Since there was a lot of build-up about loving the taste and feel of cum, I would have preferred that one of the women, probably his mother, would have swallowed a load first, then moved on to fucking.
Great start with a hint of realism which makes it all the better, but maybe that's just coming from somebody who's nearly found themselves in a similar situation, sending the right picture to the wrong person. 😏
Great start with a hint of realism which makes it all the better, but maybe that's just coming from somebody who's nearly found themselves in a similar situation, sending the right picture to the wrong person. 😏
I really liked the premise of your story and wondered how it would unfold. In my opinion you should have built on the sexual tension between the mom and son. That would have made the story far more erotic than just having them have sex, like in every other story on here.
I especially thought that that scene with the son and his mother's best friend was especially hot and creative! it seemed to reveal the friend's devious side after realizing the envy she felt. I really enjoyed it!
I love mom/son stories and I really love stories where a couple are fucking while on the phone with someone else who is clueless. What would have made it hotter for me would be if Elise came over and joined them. Five stars and a favorite point!
I loved the premis. It is great as a stand alone story, and also lends itself to any number of other spinoffs. 5*s. And I favorited it as well. Good job.
Forget about them saying she should be impregnated...they should be having her friend on the other end of the phone next time they have sex...and a competition of who can send the hotter phone pic afterwards !!
This story lends itself to a continuation of Diane and Elise's connection, especially if Diane has already tasted pussy before. I also would enjoy reading about Diane's desire to taste and play with cum. Perhaps a cum swap kiss with Elise or even Ashley?
If you do not write more about these characters, another author just might take it up.
Absolutely amazing. That is by far the best and hottest story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I could not stop reading it. I truly hope that their story will continue from here. Thank you for sharing that incredible story.
Ricky needs to ask his mom how does she know what Elise's pussy tastes like?? An idea for chapter two?
Fantastic story......Loved it. Waiting 4 more chapters. Maybe telling us about the future and he telling Elise he only belongs to his mommy. Making mommy his wife. Children ,etc.
As normal your story is hot love to see what you cum up with in a second chapter
The story just evolved beautifully. Its seemed so natural. More please.
AND STILL NO CHAPTER 2 WHAT HAPPENDDDDDDD.
..THANKS AGAIN..
USAF
"A Mother's Dirty Boy:" - Eighteen Year Old Virile Son, Ricky and Thirty-six Year Old Fertile Mother, Diane.
I appreciate, for the most part--other than two (2) mature competitive females--that mother Diane's friend, Elise, was written out of the story. Incest is not sex with friends, but with any family members of the opposite sex...incest is sex, romance, love and adoration by and between blood-kin relatives! Mother Diane has a dose of jealousy that wants her son's big cock for her sole, and soul, pleasure! With that in mind, Ricky's mother is ripe, and fertile, enough to want to be impregnated by her endowed son!
Jesus H Christ , my second reading of this story, And it got me harder than the first time. Seriously, you need to chapter 2345 and six for this one. Five stars, twice....Bye now, Got to go find my mommy
With the other comments, you definitely need another chapter or twenty. Get both pregnant over and over...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Her son fucked her friend it is only fair that she gets to fuck one of his hung friends as well. And Elise the friend has to be punished fir her betrayal.
You are amazing. What I want to know is how do you know what is in my head? Every scene proceeds exactly the way it must! Thank you
"A Mother's Dirty Boy:" - Eighteen Year Old Virile Son, Ricky and Thirty-six Year Old Fertile Mother, Diane.
The technical aspects--spelling, sentencing, paragraphing, punctuation--of this story are right on!! Practically flawless. The inclusion of an "outsider" or even any third or more person(s), other than maybe the couple's close-knit parents, in reality, is a no-no. The most valid reason--risks--for no "outsiders" is known to most people; there are many other reasons that I'll not go into. Of course the taboo (incest) genre of stories in porn is mostly faux-incest, used to garner more readers to the writer's stories.
Being a person of appreciating true incest and the hurdles they couples must encounter, while attempting to live their lives as normal as possible. I've read many dozens of actual incest couple's lives and the encounters they have to avoid and evade; those stories don't entertain anyone--threesomes or more-somes, etc.--into their lives due to the extra hardships and exposures created.
Having added some reality to occasional incest stories, I am aware that writers have all the freedom they need to write their(admitted) fiction stories. However, a story with some reality is more accepting of readers, such as the use of actual locales, historical sites, and making sure the incest couple keeps their incest love as "close to the vest" as possible. I'm very sure our writer of this story is very aware of my synopsis summary, but I feel sure a great many of the readers, based on their comments of porn incest, have no idea.
Again, these porn site incest stories are great stuff for elevating the reader's libidos, and their blood flow, and even orgasms of many proportions and frequencies--especially for myself! I just like to throw out some occasional reality in with the hardcore that we read.
this is one of the if not the most amazing stories
I love the characters and the flow, you took your time to build it up. Then delivered some really hot sex scenes making the build up or should I say tease worth it.
I love how you made the mom turn jealous, it made it even hotter
I marked it as a favorite so I can read it more.
I would like more chapters at least one more, what Ellie thought of the picture, maybe a 3some, maybe he knocks both up so now they have to live as 1 family. Dont forget about his girlfriend too
I enjoyed it
Thank you
An amazing tale of mother,son incestuous lust.
A beautifully crafted and written story, well proofread and edited.
Thank you for sharing this excellent work with us.
If there was a scale higher than 1-10, you would definitely get a max score from me! What a helluva build up and the timing of everything was excellent..Great work indeed..
This is certainly one of the greatest mom-son stories I have ever read, and is going onto my All-Time-Greats List. It has all the right elements -- a beautiful, sexy and horny Mom, a lucky son who already loves her before he gets a chance to fuck her, a mom's friend who wants her son in her pretty panties, and the contemporary sexting and phone-sexing of todays tech world. The story had great pace and style, and made effective use of the two And even though this story is full and complete as it stands, it would be nice to see a sequel ' panties to enhance the boy's intimate experiences with them. And both of the ladies have promised the boy their future attentions, as much as he can handle. What a great future he has! It would be nice to have a sequel to reads -- Ricky doing his mom and her friend Elise separately, and together; Diane allowing Ricky the opportunity to do each of her beautiful other lady-friends: and perhaps Ricky being set up by his Mom to impregnate some of those ladies who want a son like rickie in their lives, including Elise! Hope you can find time to keep the Story going! THANX!
it reminds me why I did it.. finally.. and then ..again and again.. and later... how turned on i was tasting his girlfriends on him when they left..and it was my turn!!:) shhhhhh
Perfect. Thanks so much for bringing back some old memories I had but failed to act upon. You had me, and I bet a bunch of others, breathing pretty heavy. Follow up? Please! Imagine the three of them together - never mind I just did. ;-)
Out of the stories on here, Elise might be my favorite character lol. But seriously, I really love the conflicting thoughts that Diane goes through. I adore how Elise and Diane are the devil and the angel only for the angel to fall into a deliciously, sexy hell by the hands of son’s indirect tantalizing influence and Elise’s luscious endorsement.
I love this story, especially since the women are portrayed as horny as the young man. Elise, the best friend, reminds me of Juliet Anderson's character in Taboo. I have a devilish best friend in my stories. but she only learns of the mom's incest after the fact. Of course, she thinks it's awesome.
Many have talked about how hot your story from Diane's seduction to Elise's involvement because indeed it is. But what I really appreciate is Ricky not giving into his urges when he's confronted with his sleeping mother's breasts. I love how he knows right from wrong until the moment Diane makes it clear that she wants him. Then mentally, it's almost difficult to discern from right and wrong when Ricky should make his mother happy and please her, or make her feel like she's done something wrong. Now of course, she has done something wrong, but that's the fun.
(4/21/2022) Okay now send the pix with a note asking her how soon she could come over. I can picture the three-way right now. Excellent short story one of the best I've read on this site. Everybody wins. Five stars.
Awesome story, definitely need to have a threesome with mom and Elise, or mom and girlfriend! The minor spelling and grammar did not take away from the story at all. Would love to see this story progress!!!
Amazing story! Clearly a five-star submission. Any chances of a part two threesome with Elise? Nice job!
Great story. Interesting character development and competitive tension. Definitely needs a sequel to resolve tensions
Stalks, fucksticks, fuckholes?? There are much more erotic ways of describing these parts!!
Absolutely fabulous. I so adore cunt in every way. What would I not give to eat and fuck these two sex crazed cunts, on their own and both together. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK
Id like to hear the back story of Elise flirting with Ricky & when it started.. Also, like to hear on when the Diane decided to start showing off more of her body to Ricky.. Plus, it would of been hotter if he didnt fuck Diane right away, but after he fucked all of Diane's friends cause Elise showed them the pic.. Then had Ricky & Diane fuck, but it like a secretive way.. Like had it be a Birthday surprise for Diane, where she gets blindfolded by her female friends & also blindfold Ricky & while they are fucking pull the blindfolds off.. Say Happy Birthday & then her friends explain the pics & stories they shared with Diane was of with Ricky.. After weeks & months of masturbating to her friends stories & pics, she finally gets what they have been sharing with her.. Just my 2 cents & opinion.. But overall great story, just was kinda rushed.. I just like hearing about the seduction more between the young men & older women...
What wonderfully modulated storytelling… beautifully written. I hope you’re earning something with your talent. It’s not wasted here, we readers enjoy it, but your ability to write so clearly and compellingly must have serious cash value, too.
Awesome story but there's plenty more to write with Diane and Elise and Ricky in a threesome and maybe add more of Mom's friends. Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wish I could give this story 100 points. You have a fantastic way of writing. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
That was a great story you should do another one this one a threesome with the mum and Elise
That was undoubtedly the hottest story I've read on this site. And yes, a threesome with Elise would be awesome! Damn...
Superstar it proves family love is stronger than any of the guilts fantastic
I liked it. I prefer this kind of story with only one male involved. 5 stars from me.
Awesome, very similar to my own story, I too also started with my son because of a dick pic
Anonymous from yesterday, would you care to share your amazing story, or possible write a story for us?
This story is fire! Good work, cant wait for both hotties to join in with the young stud
Pretty hot, but was it really necessary to make him a cheater? Literally zero reason to mention he had a girlfriend randomly that one time in the middle of the story, especially when it was already established he had a couple of casual no-string girls available to satisfy him and was thus a free spirit, so to speak. It just felt so random and unnecessary, and really brought the mood down a bit, for me at least. Brings it down to 4/5 for me; would have been a 5 otherwise.
Fuck, what a hot story! Better that 5 stars. I'd give it five hot shots f cum! Well written, nice pace. Built the excitement and I couldn't stop reading until I came at the end! Gonna read more of your work now!!
Fantastic story, really aroused me! I just wish one (or both) of the sexy ladies had a bush.
Wow,Hope there is a part 2,the Filthy stuff Mom,Son,And Moms friend could get into..🫦🍆🔥🥵