All Comments on 'A Mother's Help Ch. 02'

if I could vote lower I would

terrible spelling. errors in reference. lack of editing (author may be incapable of editing, assuming text is read before publication, who knows).

nonetheless, good language flow, and hot story. i'll keep reading!

PS: my wife, (a lot smarter than i in many respects), has some of the same spelling handicaps. if she were writing this story, she probably would not ask me to edit it. keep writing.