All Comments on 'A Mother's Lie: A Short Tale'

No real incest here since they're not really related. This story read as very choppy to me. Sorry. Three stars.

Lässt sich schwer lesen, manchmal ohne Sinn und Verstand. Klingt wie mit Google-Übersetzer bearbeitet. Sollte dringend Korrektur gelesen werden, bevor man die Geschichte einstellt.

Awesome! Nice work 👍

so she lied about not being his mother to get him to fuck her... sneaky!

Good job for your 1st MS! Highly specialized niche! Vastly different from others.

You laid a balanced foundation, feelings, sex, dialogue. Let's see what you do with chapter 2!

Thanks and good luck

I was glad to find that she was lying about his mother having died - glad it was his actual mother that was fucking her and only the beginning.

Did tjreader even read the story. They are really mother and son. She lied to him so they could have sex.

As written in the story: "Not even the dawning realization of her confession, as the pieces assembled themselves. She lied. She needed me. She saw that I needed her. At the pool. It was the only way I would let her."

@tjreader his Mom was alive. She lied so she could bed him.

Interesting twist to the tale, enjoyable but could have backfired that she was indeed his mom

Congrats. Not many authors can say that they wrote a m/s sex story with a Hollywood level twist. Bravo

Thanks y'all. Appreciate the feedback! Glad the twist wasn't TOO subtle... :)

5 for the twist

5 for the twist

Amazing introduction to feelings and history. Great emotional conflict with mom knowing it was the right time and reason to seduce.