by lovecraft68
This was a really great story. Loved it all the way through and you did the finish beautifully. Can’t wait to read more of your stories. A couple of small spelling and grammatical errors that made me stop and try to figure out what you meant. If you are going to keep writing this quality of story, you need a better editor or, at least, another one to help out. Keep up the good work. MtM
This was amazing! I loved it. Thank you so much. I continue to really appreciate the depth of your talent writing erotic stories. I'm a huge fan. Thanks again.
Beautiful story... I actually barely skimmed over the sexy parts just to ensure I didn't miss anything relevant so I could get to the conclusion faster...
This is one of your most touching, tender love stories you have or ever will write. Unfortunately, this story reflects events of real life that occurs too often.
I literally almost never leave comments on here, but this story is the exception and I just want to say, you are truly gifted! This is probably the most heartfelt story I’ve ever read. Thanks for putting this out to the world.
Great story, awesome twist. I was wondering from the get go how you'd handle him fucking her without her consent, even if she did obviously love him... Even if she was clearly going to seduce him after the seance...
Lovely twist! It's one of the reasons I love reading your stories so much!
Amazing story, easily one of the best erotica I have ever read. It is also among the best stories ( all forms ) I have ever read.
A truly amazing story. Another reason there should be a ten star option only available once a month.
Well done!
Bill S.
While beautifull this was a sadd story giving an even worse postnutclarity. Damn oscar writer preying the feels bringing those small tears .
5 stars well deserved.
This story is very good. Pretty straight forward approach. Could be great if the scenarios and the situations justifying or more supportive for the forbidden ❤
I never respond to stories, but this was an awesome one. Even made me tear up. Good job.
I’ll have to read more of your stories if you can continue to tug at my heartstrings like that, making me shed a tear for the satisfaction that was lacking for so long and the culmination of a suppressed love affair.
Damn this was so sad and depressing in the beginning. Didn't see that one coming where his mother had died, though I suppose I should have realised it based on the description and the Halloween theme. D'oh!
I wish she could have returned in a more permanent manner and in her own body, but I suppose that would then turn it into more of a fantasy thing instead of just being a bit paranormal. Shame though as they really did love each other and they missed out on their life together. Her departing speech was very moving. May have shed a tear or two. Just one day I would like to go on here without crying :'(
There were quite a lot of typos and missing/extra words. More so than I usually see. Kind of annoying. Like it wasn't even put through a basic spellcheck. :( A minor thing but still, should be better.
I read this four months ago. I thought it was a beautiful love story, on rereading I still think the same, only more so. 5 more stars!
LeB
A strange Halloween tale. Though it was Amber's body he was making love to, not really his mom, it still was erotic. And the mother's departing speech was really sentimental, sad yet lovely. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
It was a lovely story and I really loved the ending. You have a nice writing style and that's why I gave you 5 sars and put you on my favorites list keep up the good work.
Compares with Model Sister in sheer inventiveness and blend of lust and love. Thanks