All Comments on 'A Mother's Love Never Dies'

I like your stories, but every one has the same sex sequence.

Compares with Model Sister in sheer inventiveness and blend of lust and love. Thanks

This was a great fantasy story. I loved it. Five stars!!!!!

It was a lovely story and I really loved the ending. You have a nice writing style and that's why I gave you 5 sars and put you on my favorites list keep up the good work.

A strange Halloween tale. Though it was Amber's body he was making love to, not really his mom, it still was erotic. And the mother's departing speech was really sentimental, sad yet lovely. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I read this four months ago. I thought it was a beautiful love story, on rereading I still think the same, only more so. 5 more stars!

LeB

Damn this was so sad and depressing in the beginning. Didn't see that one coming where his mother had died, though I suppose I should have realised it based on the description and the Halloween theme. D'oh!

I wish she could have returned in a more permanent manner and in her own body, but I suppose that would then turn it into more of a fantasy thing instead of just being a bit paranormal. Shame though as they really did love each other and they missed out on their life together. Her departing speech was very moving. May have shed a tear or two. Just one day I would like to go on here without crying :'(

There were quite a lot of typos and missing/extra words. More so than I usually see. Kind of annoying. Like it wasn't even put through a basic spellcheck. :( A minor thing but still, should be better.

I’ll have to read more of your stories if you can continue to tug at my heartstrings like that, making me shed a tear for the satisfaction that was lacking for so long and the culmination of a suppressed love affair.

I really loved this story! One of the best I have ever read on Literotica!

I never respond to stories, but this was an awesome one. Even made me tear up. Good job.

5++++ stars. Beautiful love story!

LeB

This story is very good. Pretty straight forward approach. Could be great if the scenarios and the situations justifying or more supportive for the forbidden ❤

While beautifull this was a sadd story giving an even worse postnutclarity. Damn oscar writer preying the feels bringing those small tears .

5 stars well deserved.

A truly amazing story. Another reason there should be a ten star option only available once a month.

Well done!

Bill S.

Amazing story, easily one of the best erotica I have ever read. It is also among the best stories ( all forms ) I have ever read.

Great story, awesome twist. I was wondering from the get go how you'd handle him fucking her without her consent, even if she did obviously love him... Even if she was clearly going to seduce him after the seance...

Lovely twist! It's one of the reasons I love reading your stories so much!

I literally almost never leave comments on here, but this story is the exception and I just want to say, you are truly gifted! This is probably the most heartfelt story I’ve ever read. Thanks for putting this out to the world.

This is one of your most touching, tender love stories you have or ever will write. Unfortunately, this story reflects events of real life that occurs too often.

Beautiful story... I actually barely skimmed over the sexy parts just to ensure I didn't miss anything relevant so I could get to the conclusion faster...

Beautiful.

This was amazing! I loved it. Thank you so much. I continue to really appreciate the depth of your talent writing erotic stories. I'm a huge fan. Thanks again.

It is nice to read a good story.

Wow!! Great Story!! I Loved it!!

This was a really great story. Loved it all the way through and you did the finish beautifully. Can’t wait to read more of your stories. A couple of small spelling and grammatical errors that made me stop and try to figure out what you meant. If you are going to keep writing this quality of story, you need a better editor or, at least, another one to help out. Keep up the good work. MtM

UnFUCKINGbelievable!!!!!!!!

AWESOME!I!!!!!!!

loved it!...

It is amazing what love can do!

Great story. I enjoyed it immensely. Well thought out and written. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank You, LC68 !!

Toby

Absolutely love this story, probably one of the best ones I’ve read to date.

Now, that was good to the last drrop!

Incredible!

Different type of story than usually found here, original, clever, heartwarming and does leave the reader-at least this reader-thinking was this actual incest? It was Amber's body taken over by mother's spirit. Case could be made for an against and its a rare thing when a story here makes you think about more than the sex.

Solid story. It's funny because yeah, sometimes I find the set up and premise more interesting than the actual sex scenes. Although I enjoyed those as well of course.

Beautiful und Romantic!

10/10!!!!!

Well done! The plot held together well and as the adage goes, 'you left'm wanting more.' Do you have an editor? Some words you used were incorrect (lied is a falsehood. lay is to be supine present and past tense). Your grammar is good, but changing some words or the order of some words could convey a more specific feeling. Let me know.

Great Story RW

You need a proofreader.

Fuck. Yes.

Damn it you made me cry. Too close to home

And this is why you are one of my top favorite authors to follow and read. Can I give you 10 stars for this story????

You are an exceptional writer but yeah I saw some spelling errors. I am new to literotica so maybe you already know this but if you check your profile there is an icon that can connect you to proofreaders. You are one of my favorite authors. Five stars.

What a wonderful and sweet story. You did a fine job writing the story even with misspelling of words, it didn't matter to me, I knew what you meant..5🌟 for sure!

Brilliant ten out of ten. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.

Excellent story. but remember that spellchecker will not correct actual words that are used incorrectly. For instance, "hands on" became "hand son." Twice.

Great story and nice way to intermix it with Halloween.

Thanks for sharing.

Loved it!!! Do you have a proof reader? You need an editor or something. :-)

ok, but...

typos, misspellings, malapropisms, and just bad grammar, even for lit/´murrican english.

that said, i still enjoyed it.

don´t think there´s hope for you, you can´t go back to middle school, you´re too old to learn.

please keep writing nonetheless.

WOW! Totally different, heartbreaking, sad, wonderful and much more! An unheard of take on love, mothers, loss, most importantly the failure to voice that love. Too late for me but I hope readers will read this and think about who they love. Please tell them what you need them to know. Tears and pain fill my heart. Thank you.

Delicious!!

Wonderful story. Brought me to tears twice. Guess it hit a little closer to home than I expected. Keep up the great writing

"I lied in that big empty bed"

*lay

Great story. Well written and, in my opinion, just the right length and I just about teared up with emotion at the end. Good character development added to the plausibility of this story. Probably the first time I read a story all the way through on here without spilling any protein. Lol.

Thank you for sharing your talent and story, very well done!

It is indeed the best story I have read in all over my life.

You made me cry man.

I salute your writing power

You are a gifted writer

Keep it up man

I’ve read a few of your stories now and all ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. But my favourite is still, Home is where the heart is.. You are certainly a very gifted writer, one of the very few on this site..thank you for the time and effort you’ve put in to give us these amazing stories..

That was one hell of a story. I laugh...I cried. ... I had tears of joy. Thank for writing It .

Now I can go to bed. ... 4:14 am

FREAKING AWESOME...That was a 10 star storie in every respect.....1st time I ever cried with a hardon whilst reading a story before ...you MUST do a follow up on Trevor and Amber !!!!! More please!?!?!?.....

By chapter 2 I was putting my cell down to wipe my eyes every few sentences. If you decide to write a romance novel and sell it...I will definitely buy it. Great work.

very rarely a text/story took me on an emotional rollercoaster like yours did. the style of your writing and all..as a reader you can really dive into it and loose yourself.

I felt as bad for Trevor loosing his mom as happy in the end for amber and Trevor to end up together.

You dear Author are very very talented, with that being said. I enjoy your Stories more than the Original Lovecraft (he was my favourite Author until I found you here).

Simply WOW, Please Keep writing Stories.

This story struck a personal cord and made me cry. I lost someone special that I made the same mistake of not telling her of what I felt. (Not a family member) Don't ever make that mistake!

... that this story would lead me down such a path. Should have paid more attention to the fact that this was an entry in the Halloween contest. Amazing plot, well-crafted, very erotic. You had me believing. Thank you.

Vary rarely do I stop midway through and start crying.

The twist was great and changed the whole story.

Ending was great too. Wish there was a part two but I don’t know how you can top what I just read.

Well done!

Simply outstanding!!!

simply awesome!!

just wow!

Unbelievable writing, I was wiping my eyes towards the end and now as I'm typing.

Your stories always bring me sooo much pleasure lovecraft68! Hugsnkisses!

Definitely different. And a Beautiful story. Perfect ending. Another story I must read again. -dave

Definitely different. Like a past anon commenter, this one had me(a guy) in tears when I got to the part where he awoke from his dream and it was revealed that his mom was dead. Then I got pissed. I thought, "damn, I come here for an erotic "fix" and then have a rock fall on me". I almost quit reading it but I am glad I didn't. It got better. Then It got beautiful; the trick and the treat.

Also like another commenter pointed out, this incest story occurred without actual physical contact between the familial members. THAT'S creative and "tricky".

And as still yet another past commenter had posted, this plot would likely make an interesting erotic movie.

It's been almost 6 years ago and I don't know if votes are important now but I gave it a 5. I love a happy ending. Thanks for the read. -b

Though you lift a literal section from this to use in "Auntie Sin". That's annoying as fuck. Be a writer, not a programmer re-using code.

Still, in my limited experience, this story was above and beyond. Wish I thought of it.

I've Read A Lot Of Different Stories Here, This One By Far Is My Favorite!!

You're My Favorite Writer Here, I Cannot Wait To Read More!!

As with all fiction or facts, the ultimate test is time. In all of Literotica the number of stories falling in the Incest category must be numerous, but only the compilers actually know. This story could fall into several categories. The fact that a vast majority of reader commentators liked this story over many years is the best proof of it. It appears several experienced writers have mentioned the typos and word mistakes; but they still liked the story. That indicates the story's true merit. The author might have taken more care in proofreading the story, but the small mistakes do not essentially detract from the story the author was telling. This forum doesn't demand perfect typing. This story encourages a reader to look at the author's other works.

Lovely story. Well written.

I was disappointed when I first started reading your story. It was so clichéd and boring, but then it turned out to be a fucking wishful dream. So I guess it negates my earlier disappointment. Still, I think it could've been wrapped in a shorter format so that you don't confuse or turn away readers.

Overall, I think this story was great. Good writing, a very decent plot and very, very hot sex. Yeah, that's why I said Hot Damn in the title. All the build-up leading to the culminating sex and resolution was executed with finesse. There's nothing more I can add that could've made it better.

This story deserves at least a 4* if not a 5.

Creative and imaginative only begin to describe this wonderful story! Thank you so much!

Like Trevor, I loved my mother, but also like him, I didn't know how to convey those thoughts. I waited too long...then she was gone. As I think back, to those days so very long ago, I realize that she was available, and wanted the same as I. Those subtle acts, sometimes near an open invitation, but as a teen, I couldn't interpret what I see, now an octogenarian.

How I wish I had found an "Amber."

First such story like this that I've read on this site. Exceptionally written to the point one could believe in the spirit returning. EXCELLENT !

I was reading your story and when when I got to the part where Trevor's mother had passed I started crying like a baby. My girlfriend wanted to know why I was so upset, so I read the story to her and soon we were both balling. I just want to tell you that we both think this is one of the best stories we have read and filed it in our favorites, thank you Daniel and Molly

Well written. I enjoyed this story so much. Thank you.

Made me cry such a well written story your are an amazing writter in fact I must say spellburg of writters I don't have words such an amazing experience /story KEEP WRITING GREAT PLOT CHARACTERISATION EVERYTHING GREAT

REGARDS DK

Like anonymous I to lost my loved one to cancer, and this story brought back those memories. This was the most loving and hart felt stories I've ever read. Thank you.

Thank yo, very well written. Great story I can't wait to read more.thank you

i was so easily drawn into your story and i wanted to participate. Your writing quickened my breath and gave me butterflies. In retrospect if there was ever the means to produce a film, a serious effort with an erotic twist like this. I would love to pay for it.This film would be the kink reboot of Ghost and I know that this story would satisfy a lot of alternate thinkers like myself. I do hope you understand my appreciation of your story. thank you for your time spent so well.

Yours truly, A new fan. DesuShimada

One of my favorites, thank you for sharing your thoughts, talent, and time.

I looked around Lit and found the 'favorite authors' but is there a way to set it so Lit will Email me when you post a new story???

Thanks again and have a GREAT day

Christi

THIS IS A STORY DEAR TO MY HEART......THIS IS THE LOVE I HAD FOR MY MOTHER ALSO.....WE HAD MANY YEARS OF LOVE TOGETHER UNTIL SHE DIED OF CANCER.....AND YES I MARRIED AND MY WIFE KNEW OF THE LOVE I HAD WITH MY MOM AND ENCOURAGE ME TO CONTINUE LOVING HER...I HAD LOST MY WIFE THEN MY MOM AND NOW I AM BY MY SELF ALWAYS THINKING OF THE TWO WOMAN I HAD LOVED DEARLY..PLEASE CONTINUE WITH YOUR GREAT STORIES THIS ONE MADE ME CRY

Now there should be stories like this

I enjoyed this very much. It was sad and happy at the same time!

Your story had so much love and caring in it !! It was so HOT and Arousing, I hope you write soon about Amber and Trevor going forward together as a couple.

Amber will continue to tell Trevor how horny and wet he made her and how great the sex was. They need each other and now we need to see how HOT they can be in Amber's bed. Thank you !!!!!

Awesome!!!!

I nearly cried reading this story. I found it both sad and touching. I saw myself in Trevor as I never told my mother how I felt. Now I wonder if she knows what I felt for her.

It just never got off the ground for me in an erotic sense. That's partly due to the choice of language when the mother's spirit is talking to her son lover and starts using the words of a video porn star. I get that this is the only female frame of reference a lot of other readers seem to have for sex with a woman. It just took me out of the fantasy you were trying to create. The misuse of words like "lied" also hurt the storytelling. No need to go on. It just failed.

Just 2 stars to be honest.

I admit it. I am male, got some tears and a sniffle. You got the story to be sweet and dirty at the same time! Come on! A three-way with only two bodies!? That was good. This is going to be one of my favorites. Good plot development leading up to the good events...yep. You're my taboo-writing hero.

Sincerely,

Pb

Im seeing someone who had an affair with he's mother. He recently opened up about this to me. And it may sound crazy but I find it erotic. Funny but he sent me this story awhile back and I never made the connection until today. After reading it again im wondering if any woman can ever come close to capturing his heart like she did. Mother and first love is a lot to be compared to...

I think it's a good story....... more than good....... in fact, I'd be happy to act this story out with anyone who wants to....... then we can discuss it and see how good it is...... Anyone want to try it?

The spirit of his mother in a young girls body? Crap. She should have actually "crossed the veil" or whatever the metaphor is and really come back from the dead - at least for Halloween. And the whole idea of being at peace sucks - that is not much better than life truly ending at death. The afterlife should be awesome. The real life. Sorry - went off on a tangent. Anywho you are one of the best writers in here and this story let me down. Though I can see I am in the minority.

Beautiful, but alot of sadness. There are alot of people who would wish it could happen. I'm not one of them, but a lot of people. You tell a good story.

I wish this was true . Since my mother passed this has been My experience , barring the Sex scene ! Lovely ~

Seriously? Incest? I've never read such terrible writing in my life. Wow you fucked the shit out of me? I leaned back and started fucking the shit out of my mother? Like come on. Find something better to do with your life unless you're so obese you can't even move your fat ass. Do you actually believe the bogus numbers? No one wants to read about your sick and twisted incest fantasy. Try taking a writing course. You say the same things over and over again, and your use of language is limited at best.

interesting