by CouplingKnight
For a story to have impact it needs to be believable. I did not find either chapter remotely close to that threshold.
When Greg tapped his name on the door with knocks he used Morse Code not Morris Code.
all nine inches of his cock slid down her tight throat.
If he has an overall length of 9 inches and 9 inches go down her throat, then obviously she has no depth to her mouth.
Too many physical impossibilities and numerous grammatical errors, but I will continue.