All Comments on 'A Mother's Luxuries Ch. 12'

Ok, it is like the writer has gone of the rails with his story at this point, it’s gone from an at times average story to a really bad story and then it got worse…. I have no clue what his intentions are with this story, but at seams he is very confused while writing.

The scenario for this story seems to have been lost, random events are taking over.