All Comments on 'A Mother's Nasty Craving'

by craverandscarlett

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too far out

Not even real as you told to much to fast. You got a one from this reader. The only thing you failed to include was to have the daughter a virgin,

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5 for a quick read and a great masturbation story

eat shit annony, you would know q good stro9y if it fucked you in the ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

Would love to see it continue into more!

live4thebjlive4thebjover 8 years ago
I liked it but...

I agree a bit far out. ***

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love brother and sister

I love reading of a brother having sex with his sister and shooting off his cum inside of her

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
19 and 18???

How was Kenny born, then Kimmy 2 years later, but he is now 18 and she is 19?

Write like you fuck, don't rush it, take your time, enjoy it, make it great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot and nasty!

Just like I like 'em! Made me hard and made me cum. What else are these stories for?

****

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 8 years ago
anonymous:

1/17/2016 .... 19and18??? ........................ i'm really glad that

least somebody other myself did notice that blunder messes up

good deal the story butttttttttttttttttttttttttt how about this blunder

THAT NOBODY LITERALLY MENTIONED [ after10yrs.marriageafter

they moved outta state . this makes the kids Now10yrs.oldNow

Now9yrs.oldNow . sooooooooooooooo how exactly are they

already off going college huhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ]

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yes there were mistakes

Please continue to write part two. Made my six and I explode wanting to do this again like we have since we were younger. I got my Sis pregnant but she Lost our baby a month in. Maybe this was meant to be and it only love one another that much more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Which one of you two was supposed to be the editor

To get the kids' ages so badly hosed, in juxtapositioned paragraphs, no less? Were you guys too busy jacking and jilling off that you couldn't be bothered with story continuity?

awrightawrightover 8 years ago
Plagarism

This story appeared in a magazine over 10 years ago, word for word. Why, I remember the screw up of Ken and Kimmy's ages from back then.....

craverandscarlettcraverandscarlettover 8 years agoAuthor
Plagiarized from me

Well I did sell some of these stories several years ago to a few of those little "adult magazines." I keep all my stories and have been recycling some of them here, editing to try to make all the characters at least 18 years old per Literotica rules/guidelines. That has created some sloppiness, I admit. It's just easier for me to edit and recycle stuff I've already written than to start fresh, so if this story was plagiarized that's valid, but it was plagiarized from myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What a shame

There I was, happily reading the story and pleasuring myself really nice. Get to the end, and looking forward to one, fin.al push into my sloshy pussy for the perfect orgasm to end a perfect story.

What a shame to find out you've been plagiarizing all these stories, all these years.

Sigh... a woman can't even get the thrill of a climax without some jerk without scruples messing such a simple thing as a story?

What a shame.

Liz Menz

Germany

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
It doesn't add up

How come Kimmy is 19.and Kenny.is 18.when Kimmy was born two years after Kenny?

HornywvaHornywvaabout 4 years ago
??

How come you didn’t keep this story going the possibilities are endless

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hornywva

All off these stories by craverandscarlett were published here on 1/96, with the one exception being 6/96. You can click any author's "signature" and see a list of their stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

WOW!!!!!!! now that's a hot fucking story

Aclee81Aclee81over 1 year ago

Need more of this story please

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