by darkblaze012
Can I have some more... Please, Sir! You heard what Oliver Twist said! Give us some more. It's too short. It's not long enough. It may never be long enough!
Very nice and intriguing story. However I had trouble with you writing in first person could it be in third person but it did not stop from reading it. its a testament to how great or captivating your story is to me. Other than that its a nice story and more please....
There must be a second part to this story. It is so good that it must continue. Hope you can make some more.
Clearly, though, the only solution to the boy's problem is very frequent sperm injections up his mother's mommy-hole. Bet mom'll get to really like it, too.
I really liked this - but man, c'mon... Ya gotta write more! It just stopped way too soon!
I liked the first chapter and will await the second. Please, please, please. lol
This is the start. We are looking forward for more of this sensual and sexy written story.
Thanks a lot for posting!
Suzz_
Good effort on the part of the author; however, this story is beyond fiction.