All Comments on 'A Mother's Only Option'

by darkblaze012

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WilliamTellsOvertureWilliamTellsOvertureover 13 years ago
Good to the last quotation mark.

Can I have some more... Please, Sir! You heard what Oliver Twist said! Give us some more. It's too short. It's not long enough. It may never be long enough!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
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Very nice and intriguing story. However I had trouble with you writing in first person could it be in third person but it did not stop from reading it. its a testament to how great or captivating your story is to me. Other than that its a nice story and more please....

nippelfansmall2nippelfansmall2over 13 years ago
hot hot hot

plz more, and longer

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 13 years ago
very good

not nice to pull up short like thismore please

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
a secondpart pls..

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Second Part

There must be a second part to this story. It is so good that it must continue. Hope you can make some more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
a very good and funny story

Clearly, though, the only solution to the boy's problem is very frequent sperm injections up his mother's mommy-hole. Bet mom'll get to really like it, too.

nashman1000nashman1000almost 9 years ago
only 1 part?!?!

I really liked this - but man, c'mon... Ya gotta write more! It just stopped way too soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Why no follow up?

lewdalewdaover 6 years ago
Please Continue

I liked the first chapter and will await the second. Please, please, please. lol

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is the start. We are looking forward for more of this sensual and sexy written story.

Thanks a lot for posting!

Suzz_

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a5 minutes ago

Good effort on the part of the author; however, this story is beyond fiction.

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